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The Long Man by J.M. O'Farrell
Two acquaintances mark time in a yellow house discussing war, old times, and women.
Short
9pp
Box 21 by Richard Russell
A young woman visits the man who wrote erotica for her mother.
Short
10pp
Love Will Tear Us Apart by Aria Ari
A singular brief moment triggers the slow mental collapse of Tom’s soulmate, putting both their relationship and his life in danger.
Feature
84pp
In The House of God by Elisabeth Meier
By one simple question a stranger confuses and scares a praying woman in a Catholic church.
Short
5pp
The Martian Love Chronicles by Aria Ari
When a human girl falls fast for a martian she learns the only way his father will allow the two to see each other is if she embarks on a dangerous journey in search of a peach tree rose.
Feature
107pp
Cloaks by Robert Dean
After discovering a strange red cloak, a girl and her twin brother are drawn into a forest with a sinister secret.
Short
27pp
Night Bus by Peter Quelch
A routine late-night bus ride takes a dark turn for Alex.
Short
5pp
They're Out by Colin MacDonald
After witnessing a gruesome murder/suicide, a conservative gay woman is traumatized by a malevolent entity that is using her deep seeded guilt to drive her insane.
Feature
74pp
The Tesla Loop by Gabriel Gambetta
Two scientists chosen specifically by Nikola Tesla in a letter from the past must complete a mission through time to save humanity.
Feature
110pp
Ocean Beach by Roy Harris
The exploits of hedonistic, whore-mongering Jimmy Hansen, a successful, 40 YO divorcee living in San Diego's Ocean Beach neighborhood, and his brother Trevor, a high finance executive and family man running a medicinal marijuana distribution...
TV Pilot
34pp
221bCAUSE by Ben Trebilcook
A former NYPD officer working at 221b Baker St, receives letters to Sherlock Holmes. She discovers one letter from the President of the United States' son, who has been kidnapped and takes up the case.
Feature
105pp
A Superhero's Past by Tony De Lombardo
Two older men travel back in time and give their younger selves super powers in a bottle.
Feature
95pp
The Squared Circle by Vic Burns
A young pro boxer and his crew must fight their way to the top whilst the temptations afforded by rising fame and celebrity are constantly trying to drag them down.
TV Pilot
28pp
Pale Horse by Chris Courtney Martin
When a reclusive author shelters a man who escaped captivity with her long-missing brother, they’re tormented by the zealot responsible.
Feature
104pp
Duck Soup by Ben Clifford
A young boy's life is complicated as he develops a crush on his irresponsible mother's new boyfriend, right around the time his addict father returns from rehab.
Feature
80pp
The Plague Doctor by Jon Mennella
A young boy fighting the battle of his life encounters a strange but intriguing entity, The Plague Doctor.
Short
21pp
Street Wedding by Catherine Cole Rogers
A cheap, rebellious proposal in a downtown casino after several shots of tequila leads to a street wedding.
Short
7pp
Turn Me On Dead Man by David Lambertson
The alternate truth behind John Lennon's assassination told in the form of Beatle lyrics.
Short
12pp
The Caller by Matthew Mosley
With no help around for miles, two young women fight to stay alive when a killer from their past calls from outside the house, then tries to get in.
Feature
92pp
End Of The Affair by Tim Westland
All good things must come to an end. The reasons aren't always what you'd expect.
Short
1pp
Tunnel by Matthew Corry
After they discover a mysterious tunnel on their family farm, a young brother and sister must deal with an ever increasing evil presence that has infiltrated their home, infected their parents and threatened their lives.
Feature
75pp
Fate of the Night by Matt Carlson
After witnessing a wolf horrifically maul a young couple, the Harris family must face the psychological consequences of leaving them to die. Downward spiraling into PTSD, they discover the wolf is something more supernatural.
Feature
82pp
Wine Tasting by Steve Cleary
An urbane couple on a wine-tasting outing work through their marital issues over a flight — with pretentious and scathing commentary for every sip.
Short
6pp
A Kindness by Tim Westland
A prisoner who sees death as his best chance of escape doesn't count on a Doctor who is ready to pass his own form of judgement.
Short
1pp
Animated Backstreet Boys by Felipe Herrera
In this SATIRE on late 90's television shows, the Backstreet Boys are here to save the world through the Power of Pop.
TV Pilot
32pp

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