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Christmas Cards by D. Scott Mangione
Discovering there will be nothing for Christmas, a poor, Italian boy, 9, in 1949, NY, must overcome a bully, the trolls under the bridge and abject poverty to save Christmas.
Feature
110pp
The West Texas Stopwatch System by 6String Mercenary
At first football, video games, and computers are all Crockett cares about, until Nathalie and his gambling side-project change his priorities. When a friend asks for a favor and the stakes get even bigger, Crockett doesn't quit this time.
Feature
76pp
Hellplasm by Rob Barkan
A college paranormal society's reality TV ratings plummet when ghost-devouring demons invade their town, turning the team's fight to save their show into an epic battle when the demons turn to human prey.
Feature
81pp
Down In A Bar In Deep Ellum Texas by 6String Mercenary
The Man only offers fame & fortune to The Player once per lifetime...
Short
2pp
Beast by Jonathan Wesley
A half-man half-yeti musters up the courage to escape his solitary life.
Short
9pp
Junior's Farm by Steven Clark
Something's been killing off Junior's chickens...and it ain't infectious bronchitis.
Short
10pp
Bend by Anthony Dionisio
An aspiring reporter manipulates a seemingly indestructible vigilante into becoming a superheroine in order to stop the Russian mafia from selling a Cold War nerve agent to a megalomaniac.
Feature
105pp
Life: A Comedy - Pilot by Garrett Mallory Scott
One house. Three rules. Free rent. What could be better for an assortment of incredibly diverse young adults? Better to ask: what could be worse?
TV Pilot
40pp
Class by Matt Hubsher
Two former high school classmates have a chance encounter on the street and the police get involved.
Short
6pp
In The House of God by Elisabeth Meier
By one simple question a stranger confuses and scares a praying woman in a Catholic church.
Short
5pp
Satan's Revelation by Michael Piccard
God and Satan meet to discuss old times and negotiate a truce.
Short
16pp
Triumph? by Felipe Herrera
A man must face his demons after his whole family was murdered.
Short
25pp
The Model by Craig Thomas
When a young woman is abducted by a psychotic photographer, she must find a way to escape before he becomes his next "art project".
Short
7pp
A Plagued World by Tony De Lombardo
When a mutation spreads and divides a city, two lovers must see each other in secret.
Feature
91pp
The List by Dwhyte star
A gun for hire sets out on a mission to rid the world of a criminal empire.
Feature
97pp
Story Time by Kevin Hopgood
When children's authors Molly and Geoffrey Greenslade visit Hill View Primary the lessons learnt are possibly not suitable for a class of year six school children.
Short
10pp
Rock Bottom by Chris Courtney Martin
After a down-on-her-luck screenwriter reaches wit's end, she turns a breakdown into a leg up.
Short
8pp
Not Rachel by Rodrigo Baumgartner Ayres
Dave stumbles drunk into his apartment and is astonished to encounter his ex-girlfriend Rachel waiting there. When he questions her she denies being Rachel.
Short
13pp
The Greater Good by Matthew Corry
From the view of multiple people the Greater Good explores how their lives have been directly affected by the arrival of The Unseen One, an actual God that has declared itself the one and only.
TV Pilot
54pp
Ten Years Lost in the Abrams by Sean Heyboer
Lost and alone in the depths of the forest, a 10-year old boy will need to find his father and work to overcome more than the elements.
Feature
76pp
What shines in darkness by Désirée Nordlund
An assassin finds out her best friend is a police detective on her way to arrest her.
Feature
92pp
Moonchild by Chris Courtney Martin
After a visit from her estranged mother, a young werewolf is forced to choose between a successful life in the human world and the survival of her pack.
Feature
102pp
What's the Big Idea? by Steve Cleary
FEATURE, COMEDY. After saving their jobs by submitting an old screenplay under a pseudonym, a pair of slacker junior executives struggle to meet demand when the studio heads order them to keep the scripts coming.
Feature
96pp
Driving Miss Lillie by Rodrigo Baumgartner Ayres
Workaholic and alcoholic dad comes pick up his rebellious daughter at school. They go for a drive.
Short
18pp
Dirty by Shawn Davis
When a super potent strain of coca plant is developed by a leading pharmaceutical company, it sets off a life and death struggle between the United States, Russia and Columbia to gain control of the plant before it hits the streets and kills millions
Feature
101pp

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