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Fishin' With Pops by Damon Ragsdale
A father and son try to make up for years lost by the only way they know how, fishing. And it doesn't take long to realize that it's far too late for one of them.
Short
20pp
Man of Peace by Ben Trebilcook
A mysterious man, on a speed-date, finds himself re-living a past-life in feudal Japan, however his date may believe he's somewhere else entirely.
Short
12pp
Crossed Ties by Ramon Zapata
A former Shaolin monk becomes a prize-fighter to save his sick wife. But when he quits, the Triad boss who recruited him has her killed, setting the young man on a path of revenge.
Feature
98pp
Freed by Ian Courter
Freed from nearly a lifetime in prison, Lucius Johnson finds his past still imprisons him.
Short
9pp
Third Half by Daniel Jobs
In order to find the key to his dying world's salvation, a man must enter a competition and fight demons inside and outside to realize... He is being used to create an apocalypse.
Feature
120pp
"A Royal Nightmare" by Matthew Emma
A vulnerable screenwriter must fight for survival after being stalked and kidnapped by his ex-lover.
Feature
107pp
Gingerbread by Curtis Harris
An African -American teen is possessed by his grandmother, A voodoo queen, who convinces her grandson that white people are devils.
Feature
117pp
All The Fives by Steve Miles
An indebted cabby stumbles on an opportunity to reverse his fortunes when he finds a duffel full of money. But first, what to do with the dead passenger it belongs to?
Short
8pp
Revelations by Francisco Antonio Seguin
When a mourning teenager on a die-hard mission to rescue a stolen generation, discovers a Vampire prepared to unleash Hell on earth, a broken community’s fate lies in choosing their faith or war.
Feature
110pp
Beautiful Monster by Manda Pepper Langlinais
An unstable FBI agent attempts to hide the fact she's a serial killer from her partner.
Feature
73pp
New Beginnings by Linda Bean
Rain Man meets dysfunctional family.
Feature
112pp
Dreams For Sale by Ron Houghton
An ambitious, young woman rises to fame during the zenith of Hollywood's silent era.
TV Pilot
51pp
Undertakings by Kimberly Britt
When an antisocial undertaker discovers a mysterious headstone, he is forced to make a terrible decision that will come back to haunt him.
Short
28pp
Charcuterie by Chris Courtney Martin
When a pair of gentrifying hipsters move their artisanal deli into a Philadelphian ghetto, a local woman suspects they're cannibalizing more than the culture.
Feature
87pp
Robo-Reagan by Nicholas Heathcote
A man-child is forced to grow up when his best friend--an anthropomorphic robot reincarnation of Ronald Reagan--becomes vice president of the United States.
Feature
98pp
Mama of Dada by Anna Hopkins
When a woman finds herself arrested for accidentally defacing the most influential art work of the twentieth century, she must think quickly in order to get herself out of a precarious situation.
Short
15pp
Service by Travis Sharp
A former Marine recovering from addiction struggles to rediscover his place in the world after reconnecting with his ex-wife.
Short
30pp
A Damned Fate by Navid Mehraban
The life of a benevolent witch is imperilled after her courageous act backfires...
Short
8pp
Valet Day by Lucas Pops
Following the genre of “stoner comedy”, the script’s protagonists are four valet attendants, who stumble upon a luggage trunk filled with a variety of illegal drugs. The four decide to sell/imbibe the contents until they discover the trunk is...
Feature
96pp
Gormanghast by David Smith
A loving but dysfunctional family are at war with the small things that challenge in everyday life.
TV Pilot
35pp
Eddie Whorl by Rob Barkan
An ailing truck driver slowly discovers that the hitchhiker he's picked up on a desolate mountain pass is not human.
Short
11pp
Control by Alexander Taylor
Filip, a young officer working as a Control Officer in a future dominated by Scientism, must arrest those based on their emotions, but the toll of the job leads to unexpected consequences.
Short
10pp
An Avid Cavia by Thomas Wagner
Meal after mael a woman has to protect her husband from his food taster who wants to poison him.
Feature
103pp
Solitaire by Steven Clark
A troubled loner is about to get a second chance, and maybe more.
Short
9pp
Feed The Fish by Cynthia Garbutt
Two men mend their broken friendship; despite their differences and the dangerous job they undertake.
Feature
110pp

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