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There are currently 1752 scripts added to the Feedback Loop and available to read now.

Terrible Lizard by Mark Pritchard
One man's attempt to transform his date into the mother of dragons becomes monstrous.
Short
12pp
Dark Night of the Soul by R.L. Galbraith
In 1945, Natasha Buchanan, an Autistic savant, unravels a national espionage case at White Sands Proving Grounds New Mexico.
Feature
92pp
Winter Knight by Michael Norland
A slut-shamed undergraduate unable to forget about her former secret girlfriend develops an ability that lets her alter memories of others, forcing her to decide between a dishonored existence or a life of artificiality.
Feature
96pp
Dulcinea by Christine Skarbek
OCD’s destroying Samantha’s college-age daughter Bree after her gang-rape. Will she succumb to the siren call that makes bulimia, anorexia and suicide look attractive? Or will Samantha’s persistence that Bree’s a modern-day Dulcinea pay off?
Feature
137pp
Till Death Do Us Part by Bill LeBlanc
A disgruntled husband plans his revenge on his family while someone makes plans for him.
Short
7pp
Lifestyles of the Rich and Poor by Skip Byrd
A young man has life turned upside down.
Short
13pp
Bingo Man by Chris Beadnell
The small town of Harper’s Peak has had two young girls go missing in one month. Can this 8 year old girl’s imaginary friend protect her from being the next one caught?
Short
15pp
How the Wizard Came to Oz by Dan Guardino
A runaway balloon carries Oscar Zoroaster Diggs to the war-torn Land of Oz. He manages to bring peace to its people. Now he must defeat a vengeful witch to maintain the peace.
Feature
82pp
"Silver Diamond's Plot" by Matthew Emma
Á troubled ex-cop turned lawyer must thwart a racist organization from unleashing a sinister wave of terror.
Feature
109pp
Monkano by Ben Trebilcook
A CIA Agent, a bar tender, a backpacker and a scientist find themselves joining up to flee an erupting volcano in Colombia, however it isn't just ash and lava that's being ejected, it's fire-breathing monkeys.
Feature
70pp
The White Cheetah by Charles Allen Mr.
A poor homeless creole man become a super hero helping other to be better human beings make the world a better place and saving lives.
Short
50pp
Absobloodylutely Fabtastic by Laz Rojas
In 1967, a British pop singer/spy is confronted with a choice between her singing and espionage careers when her investigation of a secret plot against England uncovers a connection to a music industry mogul.
Feature
128pp
The West Texas Stopwatch System by 6String Mercenary
At first football, video games, and computers are all Crockett cares about, until Nathalie and his gambling side-project change his priorities. When a friend asks for a favor and the stakes get even bigger, Crockett doesn't quit this time.
Feature
76pp
Hope by Mohamed Mohamud
On the day of the biggest race in his career, a underdog runner is haunted by his memories. With each step forward, his past comes flooding back.
Short
6pp
Bloodlines: The Chosen by Bryan Rudolph
Vampires at the brink of extinction find a boy that can save their species. How far will two vampire hunters go to protect him?
Feature
117pp
The Writer's Journey Into Production Oblivion by Jonathan Sieff
A fledgeling screenwriter must deal with an incompetent director and a by-the-books producer who are eager to produce his work.
Short
22pp
Leaving St Clair by Stephen Coates
After saving a teenager from an attempted suicide an old preacher convinces her to give him twelve hours to prove to her that life is worth living.
Feature
94pp
Murder Dot Com by Ben Trebilcook
Six online wine fanatics decide to meet for the first time in a house for dinner and discover each one is a murderer.
Short
10pp
Seven Arrows by Keith Copsin
Escaping the streets of Albuquerque, Keith Copsin takes a job as a Youth Counselor in Arizona leading a team of boys from the Juvenile Detention Center on a modern day wagon train to Canada.
Feature
116pp
An Animated Life by Tony De Lombardo
A man creates an animated strawberry doughnut that gives him relationship advice throughout his day.
Feature
90pp
Fiddling At Dawn by Fausto Lucignani
An elderly Jewish man, chased by the FBI and a loan shark, struggles to overcome his deep-rooted prejudices when an Arab sheik offers to help him.
Feature
107pp
Squire by Deshawn Davis
A deadbeat knight drags his shy orcish squire along with him on a quest to prove they can compete with the new knight on the come up.
TV Pilot
38pp
Higher Education by Scott Heft
Pilot- Freshman Move In Day
TV Pilot
28pp
The Hotel Majestic by Deena James
A comedy about a band of hotel workers trying to save the hotel they have come to call home.
Feature
105pp
Supernetics by Nolan Bryand
Kamikaze, the world's only superhero, tries to adjust to life as a regular person when the entire world gains superpowers.
Feature
100pp

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