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A simple and funny script.

What I Loved: 

I loved the punch line. The script has an elegant simplicity. It also has an unusual turn on an old story. I think the attitude towards the suspects increased the punch of the punch line. The realization of the truth and the surprise of those involved was precious. I could see how, if the need arises, this script could be expanded to suit any size or budget desired by a film maker. I could see how a trailer of the first part of the script, to the fade out, could be a good sell point. A "money man" might want a title change.

What I'd Love To See: 

I could see how, if the need arises, this script could be expanded to suit any size or budget desired by a film maker. I could see how a trailer of the first part of the script, to the fade out, could be a good sell point. A "money man" might want a title change.

Comments

Robert Sacchi's picture

Sorry I said the same thing twice.  I had a bit of trouble with the istructions.  I went over the 25 word minimum but it still wouldn't let me save it.

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