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Jhon Dave Esparago's picture
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Can you give me a free site where you post your script and have feedback on it so you know what to improve in it?

Derek Reid's picture
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Simply Scripts has dedicated sections for feedback: https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl

Or you could just ask in this section I think if you've uploaded anything here.

I'm not super comfortable giving my own feedback tho atm on the grounds of presently writing pre-sale. lol

Good luck with your projects!

Jhon Dave Esparago's picture
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Thank you sir

Derek Reid's picture
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No problemo!

CJ Walley's picture
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Simply Scripts is one of the better places. There's also Reddit's r/ReadMyScript, Coverfly X, and the DoneDealPro forums.

Just be aware that anywhere feedback exists trolls often flourish. I know of characters on various places that routinely kill people's dreams.

Joseph Bianco's picture
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Thanks for putting this site together CJ, I have a question about feedback. I recently paid to have a "Hollywood Guy" read and evaluate my screenplay, recently completed.  I realized I can't rely on the honesty of my friends and family (yours may be different).

I received the feedback the other day and was told it needs a complete rewrite from page 1. Didn't think it was that bad, so here's my question, should I post that one for feedback or the rewrite? 
 

thanks

CJ Walley's picture
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Firstly, I'd be very wary of anyone advising page one rewrites as that tends to be the kind of terminology used mainly within the amateur scene. Has this Hollywood Guy actually got any decent credits?

Secondly, if you are going for feedback, try to get as much as it as possible before doing anything drastic like write a whole new draft. 

Joseph Bianco's picture
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Thank you,

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