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FEEDBACK - CTRL (Thriller/Mystery-Crime)

What's up, everyone?!

Looking for feedback for my next draft.

Logline: An abused artist -- who regained her sight via a microchip implant -- struggles to sever an unhinged hacker’s connection to her before he breaks its encryption and permanently enslaves her and others.


Feedback concerns:






-Anything I might've overlooked (grammar/crazy typos/etc.)