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Lily Blaze's picture
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Joined: Aug 2019
Lily's ScriptHop Packet

It took me weeks to put this together. I had technical and vision problems, unrelated to screenwriting or ScriptHop. It was just really hard for me, but I did it, as best as I could. I'm only wondering if this packet is good enough to post on ScriptRevolution, and possibly share the link.

https://packet.scripthop.com/lily_blaze_solitaire

 

It's my first packet. Please be gentle, thanks.

Julian Martin's picture
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Joined: Oct 2019

Looks great, Lily! Very cool imagery, good use of it. Maybe consider more main characters? Anyone with a good juicy part. 

Lily Blaze's picture
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Joined: Aug 2019

Thanks, Julian! The main character is non-verbal, talks in ASL only. I realize that makes it seem like he's not really there, but truth is, most of these things don't account for non-verbal characters. This is why I put a lot into visuals. There's aren't that many major characters, it's a simple story, really lol.

Steve Garry's picture
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Joined: Sep 2016

For my own probably obtuse reasons, I avoid other people's logs and synopses, let alone their scripts, like the plague - fear of being influenced, mostly.  However, I decided to check out this packet business, and your link in particular, and I think it's fantastic.  I can see its value in your marketing, and the script and synopsis - which I only peeked at, of course! - also looks fascinating.  Love those dark ones that get under your skin!

Lily Blaze's picture
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Joined: Aug 2019

Thanks, Steve! For me, it was really hard to set up the packet. But I wanted a visual representation of my script. All the text stuff I put in there is only recommended by ScriptHop. In fact, there kinda insisted only it, so I did do a lot of extra writing work. However, if my script comes through visually only without reading a word, I'll be happy.

David Lambertson's picture
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Joined: Aug 2016

Thumbs up from me!

Anthony Rodriguez's picture
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Joined: Jan 2021

I tried to read it Lily, but the program froze up on me.  I was only able to read the 1st couple of pages.  I went to your Rockstar page to look up "Soltare" and it's only 11 pages.  The Scripthop version of "Solitare" is 86 pages.

My innocent Lily.  My fragile, gentle Lily.  I WAS READING "R" RATED SCRIPT!  Mama mia.

Are you putting the 86 page "Solitrare" om script revolution?

 

 

Lily Blaze's picture
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Joined: Aug 2019

Hahaha, you've never seen my adult fiction before? It's what I do.

I decided to only upload the first ten pages (11 including title page) on ScriptRevolution. Anyone wants to read the full script, send me a PM, and I'll send it along. I haven't decided to put the whole script yet. I'm still taking things one step a time. So what you see on my profile is only a preview.

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