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My Short Screenplay - I KILLED TONIGHT!

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My Short Screenplay - I KILLED TONIGHT!

Hey fellow writers of the world. Hope everyone is well and that your Monday has started off in the best possible way.

Well, when I joined Script Revolution I posted my short script "I KILLED TONIGHT". The last few weeks I've submitted the script to different competitions and even to a few production companies/developers. I got back some very positive notes recently from one of the development executives at one of those production companies (yes they actually replied to me). I've spent the last few days redrafting the script taking all their notes and recommendations into account. I've reposted the script and would love for you guys to have a read and let me know what you think.

Here's what some of the executive's email said to me:

"There are some really evocative moments in this script, in particular elements of your scene descriptions, the framing of your protagonist in darkness and light is a great way to characterise him."

"There is a lot to like about your short film, and you have the makings of a really interesting idea here."

Here's my Script Revolution link to the script. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing and redrafting it:

I'd love to hear your thoughts. Appreciate your time and have a brilliant week.