I'm a first time writer - and loving it.

Just finished my first feature script  - which received the following comments from a reader (screenplayreaders.com)

… A strong opening that leads smoothly into a well structured, entertaining story… 

Probably the most powerful sequence is the climax of Act Three. A perfect structure that builds to climactic scenes… Aronofsky-esque, vivid and cinematic, and beautifully realized. Great imagery. Totally convincing. 

Final visionary grace notes are chilling…  Scorsese-black vision of Hell .. Great stuff. 

And, the coup de grace is a magnificent finale that recalled the epic and elemental imagery of John Boorman. 

I'm working on the next draft (so it wasn't perfect!) and am thinking about producing it myself.