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adult supervision

The closeted son of a cop meets a sexually-manipulative young woman who claims to need protection from a violent boyfriend.



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With a devout Catholic African-American mother and a white alcoholic cop father, Jeff Walsh never felt like he belonged anywhere. Until college. That's where he met Jaime, a beautiful rich girl with a heroin problem, and Ellis, the smoothest-looking gay man that ever walked the Earth. Together, they were a mighty trinity. But Jeff’s obsession with having a picture-perfect life went too far back then.

Now, three years later, with a faltering libido, Jeff travels to reconnect with Ellis and Jaime, to reinstate their triumvirate.

At the airport though, Jeff spots Stacey, a dead ringer for Jaime. Or rather, Stacey allows Jeff to spot her. Why did she pick Jeff? What purpose does she have in mind?

Ellis and Jeff drop Stacey off in a sketchy neighborhood, but they see her later that night at a Halloween rave, moments after Jeff’s proposal to Jaime ends horribly.

Stacey aggressively seduces Jeff. Moments before they have sex for the first time, she tells him that she stole money from a drug-dealing boyfriend and asks Jeff to protect her, to save her.

Ellis argues that Stacey’s crazy, which may be true. Ultimately, Jeff will be forced to enlist the help of his estranged father, now a homicide detective, to help find out the truth.

All Accolades & Coverage: 

Semi-Finalist, contest, 2002. Quarter-finalist, Fade In Awards, 2002. Top 1000, Project Greenlight, 2004.

Submitted: February 1, 2021
Last Updated: May 3, 2021

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The Writer: B. S. Carter

B. S. Carter began his writing career in second grade writing one-page (wide rule) sequels to movies like The Terminator. B. S. attended the University of South Carolina (the other USC) and graduated with a Liberal Arts degree in Media Arts (concentration Film). While in college, B. S. won the Havilah Babcock Short Story Prize for his short story “Guts,” in which a high schooler tries to stop his best friend from committing suicide. After college, B. S. moved to Los Angeles with his wife. There, for nine years, he wrote, rewrote, smoked, PA-ed for free, PA-ed for money (worked for David Lynch), worked as a reader at production companies, quit smoking, and couldn’t get arrested to save his... Go to bio

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