Alanah's love by Bernard Mersier | Script Revolution

Alanah's love

Pain is the only pleasure a woman knows, torturing and killing unsuspecting men.



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Marriage counselor ALANAH SKY is sitting at her computer desk in her bedroom with a blank stare in deep thought. Grasping what she’s thinking about, a smile of satisfaction graces her face. Standing to her feet wearing a leather bra and thong holding a blood stained knife, she walks through the chains hanging from ceiling to the other side of the room. She stares at DAVID’S naked cut up body, shackled at the wrist by the chains hanging from the ceiling. His legs are spread with chains around his ankles connected to the side of the wall. A leather mask is on his face. Shivering with fear, he endures Alanah placing the tip of the blade into his flesh making a trail down to his manhood. Words are exchanged, but the words coming from David’s mouth doesn’t please Alanah, so she removes his manhood. While he screams in agonizing pain, she zips the zipper on his mask, walking out the room leaving him to bleed out. The next day, Alanah is doing a vigorous workout in her gym. She begins speaking on her issues with men, and how she doesn’t understand women who fall for the nonsense men call “Game” At work, she sits behind her desk waiting for her client. Bored with nothing to do, she opens her desk drawer glancing over the various sexual items, grabbing a ball gag. Slowly placing the gag in her mouth, she has a flashback of when her father, uncle and their friends gang-raped her over her father’s debt.

Taking the gag from her mouth placing it back in the drawer, the door comes open and in walks LLOYD, a man she’s developing feelings for because of the situation with him and his wife somewhat in her mind relates to the situation when she was raped. They have a short session. Lloyd asks her about the glass casket and doll on her desk. Alanah gives an answer partially explaining why. Lloyd suggests they should have dinner to carry on the conversation. Alanah declines the offer. Lloyd walks out the room. She picks the doll up having a flashback of when she killed her mother, which is same night she was raped. Coming back to reality, she explains how her uncle helped with disposing the body. That same day while at lunch in a diner, Alanah is sitting at a booth looking at pictures of the men she’s murdered formed in a collage inside a folder. In the supermarket she runs across a man named DANNY with intentions on sleeping with her for the night, but little does he know as they exchange numbers, she has him lined up as her next victim. When she returns home, she goes through her closet picking an outfit for her date with Danny, and then she opens her dresser drawer debating on which one of the many drugs she’ll use on him.

Submitted: April 9, 2018
Last Updated: April 9, 2018

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The Writer: Bernard Mersier

I was born and raised in Detroit, Michigan. In my younger years, I wanted to become a doctor when I grew up. But after winning my first writing contest in elementary, I made up my mind on becoming a writer. I believe through writing, not only do you express what’s inside your heart and mind, you can reach others with your words, because words are powerful. Majority of my writings come from self-experience, the help of others inspiring me on certain topics, and what I see, read or hear about on a daily basis. Aside from writing being a talent I was born with, I mainly do it so my children can see no matter what you set out to be in life, as long as you're determined, you can accomplish... Go to bio

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