Clouds by David J. Keogh | Script Revolution

Clouds

No job, girlfriend or future and severe ADHD. A forgotten invitation to his mother’s 50th, leads to a journey that changes Stuart's life and reunites him with his father..

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A comedy drama about a character who struggles to deal with AHDH. Stuart moved to London to find a job, but things are not working out how he expected. Rejection fills his every day when a surprise call from his beloved uncle, reminds home to come back home in the north of England to celebrate his Mum’s birthday.
He travels up north and meets a girl – she might be the key to changing his fortunes. But just as gets comfortable, tragedy strikes and his uncles dies. Stuart is devastated and tries to make sense of his heart break, while navigating past his terminally angry older sister and a pursuant, very odd landlord, Barry, that has followed him up north in the belief that Stuart’s his best friend.
Just when things can’t get worse, his erstwhile father turns up on the scene and throws a literal grenade into proceedings.
Clouds is a comedy drama in the vein of Scott Pilgrim V’s The World and About A Boy. Full of laughs and heart rendering moments, it’s a story about coping with mental illness, dealing with loss and longing and how we are all more capable of becoming more than we think we deserve to be.

Submitted: January 25, 2018
Last Updated: April 14, 2021

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The Writer: David J. Keogh

I am a professional, award winning screenwriter. I love bringing characters to life and especially love writing real people in difficult situations where they have to fight against the odds. My first major screenplay, Cadeby, has been compared to Braveheart, whilst my second, Think Forward, has been compared to Harry Brown. I love collaborative writing, working with producers and creatives and frankly, just love what I do. A number of my screenplays are completed and available for you to read here. I hope you enjoy them! Go to bio

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