A retired widower experiences mysterious encounters with a flying saucer at his secluded ranch. Either he's gone insane, or his wife is an extraterrestrial.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
94pp
Genre:
Comedy, Mystery, Sci-Fi
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details

Elmer Barns, an eccentric retired artist, lives alone at his remote Missouri lake ranch, painting and avoiding people. Then a silver saucer hovers over his property — and speaks in the voice of his wife, dead six months. No one in the nearby town of Cave believes him. Days later, Elmer disappears without a trace.
James, Elmer’s estranged brother — a driven Kansas City realtor with a failing marriage — arrives to handle the estate. He expects a quick sale. Instead, he meets the people of Cave: quirky, insular, and utterly indifferent to talk of UFOs. They live by their own rules — trading favors, nursing old grudges, and treating outsiders with wary amusement.
As James digs into Elmer’s disappearance, the saucer returns. The mystery deepens. The line between hallucination and reality blurs.
What begins as a practical errand becomes a personal reckoning. In Cave’s offbeat rhythm, James confronts the life he walked away from — and the brother who never did.

Sharp, funny, and deeply human, Elmer’s Saucer explores grief, brotherhood, community, belief, and the tension between art and ambition.

Genre: Sci-Fi, Dark Comedy, Psychological Mind-Bender

Attached Talent

Writer: Tom Miller
Director: Agata Alexander (Lionsgate)
Producer: Carlo Gustaff
Composer: Clint Mansell (known for work with Darren Aronofsky)
Cinematographer: Justin Hamilton

All Accolades & Coverage

Previously optioned by Michael Caissie & Stoic Films / Michael Caissie is known for No Tears in Hell (2025), Hunter's Moon (2020) and Hangman starring Al Pacino (2017).

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Prospects
"Elmer's Saucer" has a number of appealing hooks, including it's fantastical premise and its grounded characters. Elements seem almost Spielbergian, which is high praise. The audience may be divided by the ending, but they would talk about it.

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Screenwriter Tom Miller pitches Elmer's Saucer.

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The Writer: Tom Miller

Tom Miller is an award-winning playwright, screenwriter, performance artist, musician, director, sound designer, actor, painter, and filmmaker. Mr. Miller holds a BA in Theatre from the University of Florida and an MFA in Screenwriting in the David Lynch MFA Screenwriter's Program at Maharishi International University in Fairfield, Iowa. Mr. Miller enjoys lobster and martinis, and recently retired from hosting the longest-running continuous live variety show in America, The Reverend Angeldust's Tabernacle of Hedonism in Gainesville, Florida - the Known Center of the Universe. Go to bio
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