When a high-risk prisoner transport capsizes in the Appalachian wilderness, a resilient college graduate must conquer a paralyzing childhood phobia to outrun a ritualistic predator known as the Master of Pain.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
90pp
Genre:
Action, Horror, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details

On the eve of a new life in Richmond, elite fitness buff Amy Rhodes is abducted by Kaiser Payne, a psychopathic serial killer known as the "Master of Pain," following his violent escape from a botched prisoner transport. Held captive in a remote, weather-torn cabin, Amy discovers she is intended to be the final "keepsake" in Kaiser’s sadistic ritual. While a rogue manhunt led by the disgraced Sheriff Jack Conlin closes in, Amy is subjected to her greatest nightmare: dark, confined spaces that trigger a paralyzing childhood claustrophobia. To survive, Amy must weaponize her psychological trauma, transforming her "tunnel vision" into a lethal tactical scope to defeat the monster hunting her in the unforgiving Virginia wilderness.

Commercial Hooks:
*A Universal Phobia: Taps into the visceral fear of claustrophobia (affecting ~12.5% of the population), making the internal mental battle as high-stakes as the external threat.
*The "Final Girl" Reimagined: Amy is an elite athlete whose survival is a direct result of her physical discipline and "conquering the irrational" mindset.
*Tactical Authenticity: Written by a retired Navy Commander, the script features realistic manhunt procedures and survival elements.
*Proven Industry Recognition: Received accolades from eight screenwriting competitions,
*Franchise & Narrative Universe Potential Designed as the anchor for a broader crime universe, this project offers significant expansion opportunities:
-The Limited Series ("The Twenty Keepsakes"): An investigative procedural chronicling the twenty-year history of Kaiser Payne’s previous victims and the complex FBI "cluster analysis" that finally linked the disappearances.
-The Prequel ("Conlin’s Burden"): A tragic origin story following Sheriff Jack Conlin’s descent into obsession following the disappearance of his daughter, April, exploring the moral compromise of his investigation.
-The Anthology ("The Master of Pain"): A psychological deep-dive into the Nordic lineage and abusive upbringing that created Kaiser Payne’s "I mustn't look" pathology.

Comparative Titles (Comps):
*THE SILENCE OF THE LAMBS: For its gritty, high-stakes psychological battle between a determined female lead and a meticulous, ritualistic serial killer.
*HALLOWEEN: For the relentless, "force of nature" antagonist and the transformation of the protagonist from prey to predator.
*DON'T BREATHE: For the intense suspense and the creative use of a sensory/psychological limitation as a tactical element in a survival struggle.

All Accolades & Coverage

Finalist (Page Turner Screenplay Awards 2022), Semifinalist (Stage 32 New Blood 2019, Filmmatic Horror 2024, SWN Feature 2023), Quarterfinalist (Outstanding Screenplay 2023, Emerging Screenwriters 2023, Richmond International Film Festival 2023) and Honorable mention (Finish line 2024).

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The Writer: Mark D. Clark

I am a retired Navy Commander who served for 30 years. I write stories about real-life situations with a twist of suspense and horror. My previous work has been recognized in several competitions: *IT HAPPENED ALONG THE ROAD: Finalist (Page Turner Screenplay Awards 2022), Semifinalist (Filmmatic Horror 2024, SWN Feature 2023), Quarterfinalist (Outstanding Screenplay 2023, Emerging Screenwriters 2023, Richmond International Film Festival 2023). *HELP ME, PLEASE: Quarterfinalist (Filmmatic Short Awards Season 7). *THE TRAIL TO SANTA FE: Quarterfinalist (Golden Script Competition 2023). *THE LOT: Quarterfinalist (Emerging Screenwriters Drama Competition 2026). *THE DUNGEON: Quarterfinalist (… Go to bio
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