Just curious as to whether it's a good first-timer script, this being the first time (3rd attempt) at getting close to 90 pages. My next effort will have more, as well as a better concept. Been trying to iron out a writing process for the last 6 months and I think I may have found the inklings of it. My next idea will be much better. Also wrote this in almost exactly two months (concept to first draft, June 20 - Sept 19), which is more than I've written in the last 5 years of 'learning' (procrastinating). So, all in all, this could be chalked up as a starting point and hands-on experience.
Be brutal if you wish.