A washed-up former journalist inherits a hidden facility where the potential of ordinary children is extracted and sold to keep the wealthy exceptional, and discovers he was the first person it was ever taken from.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
96pp
Genre:
Sci-Fi, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details

Marcus Reid used to be good at his job. Fifteen years ago he was a journalist with a front-page byline and a cadet named Melinda Bates watching him work a courtroom. Then a story he wrote got a woman named Emma Reeves killed. He walked out of the trial and never wrote another word. Now he pulls beers in the same bar every night, keeps a drawer of pre-written birthday cards for a daughter he's never met, and watches her life through a fake social media account he'll never use to actually speak to her.
Then a stranger named Frank Morrison dies and leaves him a storage facility. Marcus has never heard the name.

Underneath the ordinary building is a floor nobody paying rent upstairs knows exists: row after row of glass cases, each holding an orb of light that turns out to be a person's extracted potential. Rebecca Ford runs the business side now, sharp, controlled, entirely convinced she's doing something defensible. She shows Marcus the room, then something worse: a copy that's never been sold. His own. Taken from him at five, the first extraction Frank ever ran on a living child rather than a laboratory model. The exact instinct that would have made him ask one more question of Emma Reeves before he printed her photo and her workplace in the paper.
Frank didn't choose Marcus by accident. Emma was his daughter.

What was taken from Marcus went straight to a boy who wasn't thriving, the son of the man financing Frank's research. That boy grew up to be Callum Ford, a face on national television, effortlessly good with people, married into money he never needed. Rebecca married his brother, and has spent her career administering a market built on the first proof that stealing from Marcus worked. When Marcus finally stands in front of Callum, close enough to shake his hand, he says nothing. He drives away and opens the fake account he's kept for years, the one that lets him watch a daughter he's never met live a life he chose to stay outside of, and understands for the first time that Frank built him a version of the same door.

Marcus is left with a machine that offers him three moves, and Frank built all of them to cost him something: take his own capacity back, return everything in the building to everyone it was taken from at the price of losing his own copy for good, or do nothing and let three more children go under the console on Friday. Melinda is the only person he tells, and the deeper they dig, patents, shell companies, an early learning app that sells itself to parents as school-readiness software while quietly reading their kids for inventory, the more the system pushes back. Her editor pulls her off the story under pressure he won't name. A source warns her that families like this one don't threaten, they just make sure a story never gets far enough to need one. The estate's lawyer arrives at midnight with a covenant and a noon deadline: sign into operational control, or lose the access that's the only leverage Marcus has left. Rebecca tells him plainly: wipe the servers and the mechanism still exists elsewhere. There's no clean ending on that terminal. Only the question of whose hands are on the thing while it keeps going, and how much time is left to decide.

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The Writer: Jason Somerville

Jason Somerville is a Brisbane-based writer, director, and executive producer working under his production company, Loose Thread Films. His work is preoccupied with identity and the roles we perform, the masks we choose, the ones assigned to us, and the ancient philosophical questions underneath both: how much of who we are was ever ours to author. That inquiry runs through crime drama, horror, and quiet character work alike, from the psychological crime series Undercurrent to the science-fiction property Telos, developed in parallel as a feature and limited series, to The Answer, a short film exploring grief and identity through drag performance. Somerville is the author of the memoir… Go to bio
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