The Change by Mike Murphy | Script Revolution

The Change

Beware a good night's sleep.

Type:

Status:

Page Count: 
20pp

Genre:

Budget:

Age Rating:

Based On: 
My short story.
Synopsis/Details: 

Some odd things are happening to young, muscular Simon Baker. First, his hair goes blond, then his eyes turn blue. He even gets three inches taller overnight. No one – not his doctor nor his wife, Loretta – notice or care. They tell him he has always looked like this. Pictures, medical records, his clothing, and his driver’s license bear them out.

In the city one day, he meets elderly, homeless Mr. Dixon, who says he was a previous husband of Loretta and that she is a succubus who is slowly changing Simon to her liking. Though a little curious, Simon doesn’t believe much of what Dixon says, though he does Google “succubus” on his laptop after he gets home.

The next morning, he awakens to what he believes to be the blankets-covered form of Loretta. When spooning to her feels odd, he whisks back the blankets to find Dixon’s corpse. It is oddly “deflated,” like someone sucked the very life out of him.

Loretta appears and says that he really ought to clear his browser history. What Dixon told Simon is true. She had to kill him to cover her bases. Simon will now ask how high when she tells him to jump or she will, at best, change him into something ugly.

To remind Simon of who is in charge, she hangs Dixon’s deflated form in a see-through garment bag on her husband’s side of the bedroom closet.

Submitted: October 28, 2024
Last Updated: October 28, 2024

Want to read this script? You must join the revolution first. Don't worry, it's free, easy, everyone's welcome, and you can start reading right away.

This Script Is Loved By 2 Readers

Mark Deuce's picture
imad chelloufi's picture
Mike Murphy's picture

The Writer: Mike Murphy

Mike, a four-time Parsec Awards finalist, has had over 150 audio plays produced in the U.S. and overseas. He’s won a dozen Moondance International Film Festival Awards (winner, finalist, and semi-finalist) in their TV pilot, audio play, short screenplay, and short story categories. A more complete list of awards is presented below by year. In 2020, his screenplay Die Laughing was a semi-finalist in the Unique Voices Screenplay Competition from Creative Screenwriting magazine. The following year, his TV pilot script “The Bullying Squad” was a quarter-finalist in the Emerging Screenwriters Genre Screenplay Competition. His prose has appeared in many magazines and two dozen anthologies. In... Go to bio

More Scripts From Mike

FATHERS' DAY
Two fathers, two sons, one murder.
Feature Crime, Drama For sale 90pp
2 readers love this script
Die Laughing
A granddaughter fights to honor her Grandpa's odd last wish.
Feature Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Thriller For sale 94pp
2 readers love this script
Balancing Act
The aliens' rule: One death for one life.
Feature Sci-Fi For sale 73pp
The Last Men on Earth
The Last Man on Earth learns that he isn't.
Short Comedy, Sci-Fi For sale 14pp
5 readers love this script
The Morning After
A man tries to fathom what caused the fresh scar on his body.
Short Horror For sale 3pp
5 readers love this script
The Artist
Digby's art is truly magical.
Short Horror For sale 4pp
3 readers love this script
Breakfast for One
An unexpected visitor brings a fatal warning.
Short Fantasy, Horror For sale 5pp
3 readers love this script
The First Temptation
The story of Eve's first temptation.
Short Comedy For sale 3pp
3 readers love this script
Filling Station
Traveling alone on a dark road, a young man makes a stop at a "filling station" where gasoline isn't the only thing for sale.
Short Horror, Mystery For sale 6pp
3 readers love this script
A Heavenly Price
What is the moon worth?
Short Sci-Fi For sale 22pp
2 readers love this script
Rearview
Cars are part of our life. . . and death.
Short Action, Horror For sale 25pp
2 readers love this script
Word for Word
Grandma, is that really you?
Short Fantasy For sale 5pp
2 readers love this script
Happy Birthday, Dear Emily
Fire is good. Fire is cleansing.
Short Fantasy, Horror For sale 13pp
2 readers love this script
They Will Come
If a human builds it.
Short Sci-Fi For sale 8pp
2 readers love this script
Under the Coats
One more guest at the party.
Short Horror For sale 8pp
2 readers love this script
Ready for the Storm
After the Big War, a father strives to protect his daughter from certain death.
Short Drama, Sci-Fi For sale 7pp
2 readers love this script
Playtime
Not a game to lose.
Short Sci-Fi For sale 1pp
2 readers love this script
Soul Food
A cat interferes with his master's death.
Short Fantasy For sale 1pp
2 readers love this script
Mr. Spiffy's Fun Show
Who hired the birthday clown? It was you. . . wasn't it?
Short Horror For sale 1pp
2 readers love this script
Soup's On
In a remote diner during a bad snowstorm, a man unwisely accepts an invitation to meet a woman who he wronged years earlier.
Short Crime, Drama For sale 7pp
2 readers love this script

Pages

sendnudes