When a retired quarryman is found burned to ashes in his armchair, two detectives uncover the truth behind a girl’s disappearance in 1976 — and awaken the spirit of her vengeance in the ancient, water-filled pit where she died.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
50pp
Genre:
Mystery
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Based On:
Original concept by David Denny
Synopsis/Details

On a rain-lashed night in rural Staffordshire, police discover Bob Bell, a reclusive pensioner, mysteriously incinerated in his chair. The room is untouched by fire — except for a single wet towel on the floor.
Detectives Harry Hart and Lisa Sims begin what seems like a bizarre accident investigation, but fragments of evidence — an old photograph, a towel scrap at Croxden Abbey, and a long-forgotten name — lead them to a cold case from the summer of 1976: the disappearance of fifteen-year-old Vicky Morton.

Through a series of eerie revelations, the truth resurfaces. In flashback, we witness Vicky’s fatal encounter with Bob — a man twisted by the abuse of his zealot mother, whose warped piety turns her playful teasing into a mortal sin. In a fit of moral rage and lust-shame, he drowns her in the ancient flooded quarry, covering her face with the white towel that later becomes her mark of vengeance.

As Hart and Sims retrace the crime through the haunted night, the drowned girl returns — and blue fire rises from the black water. By dawn, both sin and penance have claimed their final victim.

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The Writer: David S Denny

David S Denny is a British writer whose work moves between the literary and the cinematic — blending psychological realism with myth, memory, and the uncanny. His stories explore humanity at the edge of extinction, faith, and sanity. His screenplays and fiction include The Last Winter , Dead Man’s Shoes , Do Not Go Gentle , Spookarama UK , and the memoir Born and Bred . He is also the author of the successful eBook Jonathan Postlethwaite and the Seed of Corruption , which has surpassed 5,000 downloads worldwide and is currently being adapted for screen . David’s literary works include the poetry collections The Beach and Dull Days Indeed , the Joycean short story collection Year of the… Go to bio
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