When a retired operative is blackmailed over coffee to take one last job, he silently rigs his handler to a table-mounted kill switch before calmly walking out.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
4pp
Genre:
Thriller
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details

THE STORY
When a slick corporate handler attempts to blackmail retired operative Vincent into one last assassination job over morning coffee, Vincent appears to quietly accept his fate. But while playing the defeated ghost above the table, Vincent spends the entirety of the meeting blindly and methodically assembling a lethal, wire-triggered explosive below it. After Vincent calmly agrees to the terms and walks out the front door, the handler shifts in his seat—only to discover a live kill-switch looped directly behind his kneecap, leaving him permanently trapped in the booth.

COMMERCIAL HOOKS & ROI
• Pure "Competence Porn" & Tactical Realism: Audiences crave hyper-competent protagonists who operate with grounded, mechanical precision. The short delivers this entirely through action rather than exposition. We watch a professional establish sightlines using a napkin dispenser, mask audio with a ceramic mug, and blind-thread a lethal trap with ruthless efficiency.
• Highly Contained / Budget Friendly: A single interior location (a coffee shop booth), daytime shooting, two actors, and zero on-screen weapon discharges. This is a micro-budget production that yields massive, blockbuster-level tension without the need for expensive stunts or VFX.
• The "Under the Table" Twist: The script operates on two completely different planes. Above the table, it plays as a standard negotiation where the blackmailer holds all the power. Below the table, it is a high-stakes, real-time bomb assembly. The audience is in on the secret, creating a delicious, agonizing suspense that hooks the viewer until the final frame.
• Strong Series / Feature Launcher: By ending on a brutal, unresolved freeze-frame—a handler trapped by his own hubris—the short acts as the perfect calling card or cold open for a larger feature or series.

COMPS & TONAL INFLUENCES
• Tension & Pacing: The tightly wound, non-linear psychological suspense of Christopher Nolan.
• Atmosphere & Dialogue: The sparse, grounded, and consequence-heavy standoffs typical of Taylor Sheridan's work (e.g., Sicario, Wind River).

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The Writer: Mark D. Clark

Mark D. Clark is a screenwriter specializing in high-stakes suspense, horror, and action-thrillers. A retired Navy Commander with 30 years of service, Mark’s writing is deeply informed by a career that spanned from serving as a hospital corpsman with a Marine infantry battalion during the Persian Gulf War to serving as an Operations Officer (S3) and Intel Officer (S2) during the Iraq War. This boots-on-the-ground experience lends a visceral authenticity to his military and supernatural thrillers, grounding even the most fantastical elements in a gritty, lived-in reality. A graduate of the Marine Corps University with a Masters in Military Studies and an MBA from New Hampshire College, Mark… Go to bio
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