What I Loved
The relationship between Candice and Amber.
The use of British swears 'Bollocks'.
The simplicity and urgency of the situation Candice has to deal with.
The straightforward way the script is written.
The stereotypical manner of Candice (teenager) as we're first introduced to her.
The awkwardness of being squeezed up against large breasts...
What I'd Love To See
I'd like to see explanation of how Candice and Krissie got the weed, and made the cake (flashback?). Also the relationship between Krissie and Candice, as we know they're friends but what is the relationship between them is like e.g. are they bubbly and friendly or mischief makers? Also to show the urgency how eating the cake would be bad, a representation of how much weed is in the cake would add to the criticalness of a slice going missing. Or potentially a story Krissie tells Candice about how intense the weed is, and what it did to a friend of theirs, to add to the terrifying realization of what it might do to Amber.