Mon, 2018-Feb-19 23:23 (GMT)
G. Howard Gutshall
Script:
What I Loved
I loved the protagonist's need to anthropomorphize her appliance - it was relate-able we name our cars and talk to our pets... It seems that need is what draws her in to the android in the end. She sees in it what she wants to see not what it actually is.
What I'd Love To See
I'd love to see a more fitting ending than just the run-of-the-mill "error error error"... Have you considered a different justification for the android's change in communication style? The change was rather abrupt and the reason seemed tenuous. What if the smooth lines were just dialog lines from a soap opera (top result of the android's "Google search"), and after the women falls for it, have the android revert & reveal the actual source of his suave lines...