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Screenplay Feedback: Both Hands In

Hello all,

I posted a coming of age, road trip drama that I'm looking for feedback on. It is a blue collar Star Wars: A New Hope meets a commercially accessible Broken Flowers and Hearts Beat Loud. I come from a music and horror movie background and have some high profile rock musicians and experienced Horror actors/crew attached and interested, but know the screenplay can be improved with your help before I go further into pre-production. Thanks in advance for taking a look.

doug esper

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