
Synopsis/Details
Alice Smith will never forget her honeymoon by the seaside,
after she killed her young husband on their honeymoon wedding
night at a swish hotel in Blackpool. She got away with
murder that night, but she didn't get away from her
nightmares. 5 years later, still guilt ridden she goes back
to face her demons...literally.
The story originates from a true crime famously known back in the day as the ‘Brides in the Bath
Murders’, conducted by the bigamist and murderer, George Joseph Smith.
There are so many synchronicity’s with myself in the real world with this true life story, that I was
compelled to write my screenplay with fictional characters that are meant to be distant family
members of the murderer George Smith and the victim of one of his murders Alice Burnham,
whom he drowned in a bath at a bed and breakfast in Blackpool.
Now I grew up, in my childhood, in Weymouth in Dorset. I joined the Royal Navy and had my last
draft on HMS Invincible which was stationed in Portsmouth, then I married, bought a house and
moved to live in Blackpool Lancashire after I left the Fleet Air Arm.
George Joseph Smith had links to all three towns, and being partial to a good paranormal story, I
was impelled to write this supernatural Horror thriller.
My characters the protagonist Alice, a distant relative of and perhaps the illegitimate child of her
great grandfather George Joseph Smith.
The antagonist ,her Husband George, a descendant from a great Aunt Called Alice Burnham.
Nobody knows how these two lives became intertwined, was it fate, co-incidence or did Alice find
out her past history and inadvertently doing an ancestry check find her would be husband through
her lineage and family tree.
What forces were at play that compelled Alice to groom her victim to marry her so she could exact
a revenge on her great grandfathers execution?
But what made her go back to Blackpool where they honey mooned, and where her husband met
his grisly and gruesome end.
The folklore of missing persons of those who go for a swim of one of Blackpool’s 3 piers and never
return, and the so called sea monster that is said to be claiming the lives of those unfortunate
swimmers bathing in Blackpool’s shallow waters and 7 miles of sandy beaches.
Is Alice guilt ridden of her actions that killed her husband in the same manner her great
grandfather had killed his victims, is this why she came back to her crime scene, the one where
she had gotten away with murder?
It’s not always nice to be beside the seaside, where the brass bands once played, and what is it
that lies in wait for its victims in the shallow waters just of Blackpool’s promenade and Piers.
What is the relationship of the young canadian hotel Porter called Mark with the story, well that
might be going back to George Joseph Smith’s only legitimate marriage to Caroline Thornhill on
the 26th January 1898, who after serving time in prison fled to Canada. Is Mark a descendant from
Caroline’s children from another man whilst living in Canada, and why did Mark come back to the
UK, did he know about his families history and was also looking for retribution to his great grand
mothers murky past?
Story & Logistics
Story Type:
Hero's Journey
Story Situation:
Involuntary crimes of love
Story Conclusion:
Surprise Twist
Linear Structure:
Linear
Moral Affections:
Guilt
Cast Size:
Several
Locations:
Single
Characters
Lead Role Ages:
Female Young Adult, Male Young Adult
Hero Type:
Ordinary
Villian Type:
Beast/Monster
Stock Character Types:
Final girl
Advanced
Adaption:
Based on True Events
Subgenre:
Action Suspense-Thriller
Subculture:
Dark culture
Equality & Diversity:
Female Protagonist
Time Period:
The Big Data age (2001–present)
Country:
United Kingdom (UK)
Illness Topics:
Psychological
Relationship Topics:
By marriage
Writer Style:
Stephen King