Bee-El by CJ Vecchio | Script Revolution


LOGLINE: "A young girl befriends something that’s inside her closet." TAGLINE: "Hell hath no fury than a little girl scorned!"



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The story begins innocently enough as Sabrina, a cute, innocent nine-year-old picks wild daisies for her mother. They seem to have a great relationship. But her mother notices her playing with a new doll – a doll that she didn’t buy her.

Her mother thinks nothing of it. After all, most children have had an imaginary friend at one point or another. But what she DOESN’T know is that Bee-El is very real. And he lives inside the walls, once in a while keeping an eye on things from the closets.

Bee-El would do anything for Sabrina… ANYTHING. And that’s when we discover that Sabrina isn’t so innocent after all as she tells Bee-El about some bullies from school.

Things take a very, very dark turn. And as Bee-El continues to do Sabrina’s evil bidding, we find out who the real monster truly is.

Short Film we made in 12 hours and paid for with my Stimmy Check!

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Submitted: August 26, 2020
Last Updated: June 30, 2021

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The Writer: CJ Vecchio

A writer of Sci-Fi & Horror. Closet superhero fanboy. The Deity of Fresh Ideas! The only reason I'm writing horror is due to my pitbull IZZY , I'm a chicken shit scaredy-cat without her. Current Scripts : Bee-El (Horror short - working on full) Evil Never Dies (Horror short) Cuba Road (Horror short) Go to bio