An alcoholic cop on the edge struggles to maintain his sanity when confronted by the wheelchair bound ex-con he shot and crippled for life years earlier.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
120pp
Genre:
Crime, Drama, Mystery, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
NYPD Detective Bill Blake is fighting a losing battle against the ghosts of his past. A once-decorated officer now scraping through each day in a haze of guilt and addiction, Blake clings desperately to his fragile sobriety and his growing attachment to Mary, a conflicted confidential informant who offers him a fleeting glimpse of hope. But Blake’s fragile world shatters when Anton Leonard — a wheelchair-bound ex-con Blake crippled during a violent confrontation years ago — moves into the apartment next door. Haunted by old sins and unable to separate reality from paranoia, Blake finds himself drawn into a deadly web of corruption, betrayal, and escalating violence, as a string of murders tied to a forgotten heist threatens to drag him under. As pressures mount from all sides — the department, Internal Affairs, his own conscience — Blake spirals deeper into obsession. Convinced Leonard is orchestrating his downfall, Blake must confront not only the vengeful specters of the past, but the terrifying possibility that the real enemy may be closer than he ever imagined. EXIT is a dark, brooding psychological thriller that explores guilt, redemption, and the fine line between justice and madness. ******************The REVIEWS are in on EXIT*************** "...writing is good, character descriptions are done well... Overall, I found your story quite entertaining. I think from a structure perspective, you set things up quite nicely and you kept the story moving throughout. Keep up the good work." "The author writes with considerable literary flair (in a) lively writing style... scenes are highly visual and cinematic... very well written, with stylistic flair... makes for an entertaining read... The premise has potential. Two mortally wounded men, one haunted by guilt, the other by a need for vengeance, engage in a bitter, vicious game of revenge and atonement." "...excellent writing. The opening is beautifully painted. 'A brilliant and creative premise'... An excellent vehicle with some great characters and a wonderful basic story that is refreshingly original." "Quality of Writing: very good Cinematic Quality: very good. I found the writing very colourful, such that it created some great imagery... so many colourful characters involved... Overall, an enjoyable story. Well done!" (-Zoetrope Virtual Studio) "good, tense start. Action well described, both sound and visuals... a dark, moody story... your strong point is dialogue. High marks there... You do paint an interesting portrait of insanity." (-2009 Nicholl fellowship winner) *********************************************************

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The Writer: Brefni O'Rourke

New York based screenwriter and novelist. Author of more than 60 original feature-length spec screenplays, primarily within the action, suspense-thriller, and horror genres. The "cinematic Brefniverse" includes: " The Awning ", a supernatural thriller, has been named a quarterfinalist in the 2023 WeScreenplay Feature contests. It was named a finalist in the 2022 Story Pros International Screenplay Contest and has been awarded a Coverfly badge of - Top 6% of discoverable projects. In March of 2023 it made the Red List as the # 8 ranked thriller screenplay. (The novel is now available on Amazon - https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CD4ZKQDZ ) " Wake ", a psychological thriller, was recognized as a… Go to bio
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