Intruders! by Patrick Hunter | Script Revolution




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Trapped by a catastrophic storm, a group of strangers barricade themselves inside an isolated rural home -- stalked by a FACELESS creature lurking in the surrounding forest.

Somewhere deep in Central Mississippi, three friends seek shelter from a MASSIVE thunderstorm. After finding safety in an isolated country house, they decide to settle in for the night. Outside, the storm intensifies as they discover a stranger living in the attic. They all form an unlikely friendship until the panicked arrival of a screaming woman, who warns them of a FACELESS MAN lurking between the trees.

Trapped by the storm and this insidious threat, the group barricade themselves inside in an attempt to survive the night. As the faceless creature lurks outside the house, mounting tensions inside threaten to tear the group apart.

Submitted: November 20, 2019
Last Updated: February 29, 2020
Times Downloaded: 3
Last Downloaded: February 29, 2020

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The Writer: Patrick Hunter

I'm a rookie screenwriter from South Mississippi with B. A. in Theatre. Also the co-founder of a small production company, Falconista Films, with whom I've written and directed a handful of short film projects. As a storyteller, I'm passionate about telling stories that are both realistic but also celebrate the realm of impossibility that exists only in the movies. A few influences would have to include: Clifford Odets, George Romero, Anne Washburn, Scott McCloud, and Keiko Nobumoto. Go to bio

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