A government hitman must fight for his life when a ruthless mercenary is paid to find and kill him.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
43pp
Genre:
Film-Noir
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
No Honor Among Thieves is about Frankie Smith, a man born into the life of corruption and violence. Frankie is a simple man. He's a big jazz lover who just wants to own his bar, but is forced to be a hitman by the government after he kills a corrupt police officer. However, a ruthless and soulless mercenary named Rhys Jax is on the hunt for Frankie. Now, Frankie plays a deadly cat and mouse game with Rhys with the loser ultimately dying in the end.
All Accolades & Coverage

This script is what quotable critics would probably call a wild ride. The plot moves at breakneck speeds and really doesn’t leave much time to be bored. Any audience for a short has more attention invested than a feature audience--shorter movies means shorter attention spans required. This script looks to reward that short attention span with constant action and only brief breaks in the scenes--even the breaks manage some kind of tension.

That latent tension is usually due to one of quite a few memorable characters. Rhys, Nia, especially Nattie, are interesting characters to be following, simply for the severity of their actions. This is smart character development for any action script.

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The Writer: Jeffrey Bowie Jr

I've been screenwriting for nearly ten years with my recent accolades my pilot script, No Honor Among Thieves, as a finalist in the 2018 Oaxaca Film Festival and 2019 Emerging Screenplay Finalist. My short film as a writer and director, Minutes After Midnight, was a 2017 official selection and Gold Award Winner in the LA Film Neo Noir Film Festival. Got my Bachelor's Degree at the Art Institute of Washington to hone my craft in writing and directing. I've written and directed several shorts thus far and have worked with various talented actors who worked on projects such as House of Cards, Jackie, or Veep. My scripts tend to lean into the weird and darker side of the world (akin of David… Go to bio
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