Three friends (based on true stories) are devoted fathers torn from their children by a system prejudiced against Fatherhood.
Type:
Feature
Status:
Seeking finance
Page Count:
107pp
Genre:
Comedy, Drama
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
Paul, and his two friends are caring fathers before brutally tearing them away from their children. Our lead’s suspicious wife contrives an assault charge and sees him arrested and tried for domestic violence. From there, the system encourages her to destroy him, at the expense of their children. Paul loves his kids. He loves his wife. That’s all that mattered to him; and now he finds himself arrested, thrown out of his own home, and sleeping in a friend’s spare bedroom. Where do you go from here? You fight for your kids, you fight to regain a sense of what matters. Ann, Paul’s jealous wife turns on Paul, terrified by knowing he needs something from her she can't provide. What lies beneath her fear? John, Paul’s new house mate, hasn’t fared any better. His kids haven’t had the same address for six months, when they have an address. Most of the time they live on the streets with his druggie ex-wife. And the courts tell him he has no right to see them, but... we can only guess where his child support goes…. Our trio always looks to Marti, to do the right thing, and he never lets them down. Marti’s faith kept him strong, and righteous, but it wasn’t enough to stop him when the hunger for touch grew too great. Caught in the act, he surrenders his home and kids to Cynthia, whose own fears kept her from allowing the intimacy they both needed. Thrown together, the men find humor mixed with the pain from their struggle. Marti discovers that love can heal, even after he nearly dies for it. John’s hookers show him a kind of emotional intimacy he never new existed and the girls never expected. They are all changed for the better. Paul finds strength and a better way to parent in living for himself.
All Accolades & Coverage

Out of all of the scripts I’ve read, it’s rare to read a cinematic narrative in which Christianity is not only viewed in a more positive light, but it’s also actually coupled with mature content. Too often, spirituality of this nature is partnered solely with family-oriented affairs instead of truly morally conflicted issues and the adults dealing with them. Your entire role-reversal is also a much-needed breath of fresh air amidst the torrent of films in which men are the soulless adulterers who can’t understand intimacy and the needs of their significant
other. By focusing on the male’s side of neglect— both emotional and physical—the story is automatically made all the more compelling. We’ve all seen the wounded female scarred by the man that cheated on her, but you’ve opened doors by placing the focus on the hurt men who are typically supposed to be the “tough guys” who don’t come to any sort of epiphany until the climax of the story. The hard part about this, however, is presenting your protagonists in a strong way so as not to make the viewer think them as... Well, for lack of better words, “sissies”. And for the most part, you’ve accomplished that. PAUL is a capable character who gains sympathy from his undeniable perseverance and determination and greatly reminded me of the pitiable character from the excellent book, THE ART OF RACING IN THE RAIN. Balancing out Paul’s emotional dilemma was that of John who I found to be the second most interesting character next to our
lead. The attention-getter for him being that something morally good derived from something morally askew (giving actual love a second chance after having relied on the company of prostitutes for so long).

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The Writer: Melody Brooke

Raised in Oklahoma in the wings of a theatre, Melody came to drama naturally. From childhood she was writing scripts for herself and her siblings to act out for family functions. She went on to obtain a degree in Theatre from the University of Texas at Dallas and, later, a Masters Degree in Counseling and Guidance from TWU. Melody studied and taught with Jeff Alexander, Jayne Mansfield’s acting coach. The birth of her twin girls pulled her out of acting and into a career as a Licensed Professional Counselor. With the twins and their older sister grown up and “launched” and two books to her credit, Melody returned to film with an invigorated passion for great story telling. As a subject… Go to bio
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