The Coke Deal by Brandon Kruze | Script Revolution

The Coke Deal

Two suspicious men meet in a field for an illegal business trade.



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Two guys are in the middle of a "coke" deal when they are killed by two corrupt police officers.
I wrote this a long time ago. I can already see things I did wrong then that I've learned now; like the horrendous title page and the long, drawn out action lines. But this was made with the intention of writing the most ridiculous story I could think of.
See if I did my job right.

Submitted: March 8, 2020
Last Updated: March 8, 2020

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The Writer: Brandon Kruze

An amateur film maker, aspiring writer, and horrible musican; I just like to create because it keeps me from losing my mind. I have a youtube channel where I post occasionally, but I haven't sold any stories or had any serious projects produced. I don't really know what I'm doing here; but if you found me, hello! Go to bio

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