On the night of his death, a drug dealer in over his head is given a second chance to find redemption and change his fate from none other than Death himself.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
100pp
Genre:
Crime, Drama, Fantasy, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Synopsis/Details
Charlie Grimm is a low-level drug dealer who along with his partner Tyrell owe a gangster by the name of Cookie money for drugs they ended up using instead of selling. Out of time and options, they attempt to rob a liquor store. During the robbery, Tyrell shoots the store clerk, but Charlie is able to help a woman named Angel escape unharmed. The store clerk’s son kills Tyrell before they can get away and Charlie finds himself on the run. Cookie and his henchmen are waiting for Charlie back at his apartment, and proceed to take him hostage. They try to kill Charlie by tossing him tied up off a pier, but the personification of Death saves Charlie from drowning. Charlie wakes up in the hospital where Death tells him that he is fated to go to hell, but has a second chance to make up for his past by doing a selfless act. Charlie has difficulty believing what Death has told him and struggles to accept his fate. He is led to a strip club where he finds Angel dancing. They talk but Angel doesn’t believe Charlie's outrageous claims. Outside the club, one of Cookie's henchmen spots Charlie and tries to kill him, but Angel saves Charlie and takes him back to her apartment. While at Angel’s apartment, Charlie finds out about her tragic past and tries to convince Angel that they should leave town together and start a new life, but before they can leave, Cookie's henchmen track down Charlie and take him away. Charlie is able to outsmart Cookie's henchmen and return to Angel's apartment where he finds she has slit her own wrists. Charlie tries to keep Angel alive, but Cookie suddenly arrives and a fight ensues. During an intense struggle, Cookie stabs Charlie with a knife, but Charlie manages to kill the gangster with his own gun and save Angel’s life. Charlie and Angel steal a car and leave town together. The two develop strong feelings for each other during their drive across the country. They arrive at Charlie’s childhood home where he is able to reconcile with his mother who he has not seen in years. Charlie's mother welcomes Angel into her home with open arms and they quickly form a close bond together, giving Angel the love and stability she never had in her life. Charlie’s health rapidly declines and he soon realizes he is dying from his knife wound. Death visits Charlie to take him away and explains that it was always his time, but his self-sacrifice allowed him to find redemption. Although, Charlie is sad because he won't get to have more time with Angel and his mother, he is at peace with himself knowing that he’ll be going to heaven in the afterlife. The End.
All Accolades & Coverage

COVERFLY RANK:
Top 40%of all 100,761 projects
Top 42%of 28,153 Drama projects
Top 46%of 41,743 Feature projects
Top 46%of 11,564 Feature Drama projects

PROFESSIONAL COVERAGE ENDORSEMENTS:
WeScreenplay Feature Contest (2022)
Notes Date: December 31st, 2021
Top 11% Concept
Analyst: JMLTW
HIGHLIGHTED STRENGTH
The Unfortunate Death of Charlie Grimm has a simple and easily pitchable premise that is likely to capture the imaginations of readers and audiences alike. The story has a fable quality, pulling on mythological elements like the personification of Death to tell a tale that has universal relevance. Facing death is something that every human has to come to terms with as well as the decisions that have led us to that point. So this is a story that would travel well internationally. The writer also makes a strong choice in having the action take place in condensed period of time, which maintains a tension throughout. There is plenty to admire about The Unfortunate Death of Charlie Grimm. The story is simple and moves at a welcome pace. The characters are generally quite strong and most of the structural beats land.

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The Writer: Ryan Evans

This has been a milestone year for Ryan's screenwriting career. His raunchy rom-com COMING UP SHORT placed as a SEMIFINALIST in the Filmmatic Comedy Screenplay Awards Season 7. His holiday adventure WILD WILD CHRISTMAS placed as a SEMIFINALIST in the Emerging Screenwriters Family & Holiday Screenplay Competition. His animation screenplay MEET THE ROACHES made the QUARTERFINALS of stage 32's 3rd Annual New Voices in Animation Contest! His short script THIS NEW WEST was named to Coverfly's RED LIST as the #4 WESTERN SHORT of ALL TIME and has also placed in numerous screenwriting competitions. He's ready to pitch his creative portfolio and obtain professional representation. His success as… Go to bio
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