Stevan Šerban
Script:
What I Loved

Very interesting story. Real horror refreshment.

The poor selesman was given the task of how many contracts he had to complete within a certain time limit. With this stress, the people on whose door he appears for him are just numbers, so it's perfectly clear that he did not see it is a vampire. With such pressure from his company he would not notice even if a man with a horse's head would open the door!

What I'd Love To See

I'd like to watch this movie on a big screen.It reminds me much of Addams family, which is good! I personally like this kind of dark humor.

Both the salesman and the vampire are great characters so they can be easily played in the movie.

Perhaps the dialogue could be a little longer and with a little more ambiguous sentences.