Marcelo Deugarte Authenticated Joined: Jun 2025 Send PM Tue, 2025-Jun-10 19:53 (BST) Cheers all, I recently joined and submitted my romantic comedy screenplay DYING LIGHT OF THE ETERNAL CITY. I am looking for any and all feedback on the script. Its 125 pages. Thank you for your time and attention! Marcelo Deugarte Log in or register to post comments Elizabeth Blandford Rockstar - Gold Joined: Dec 2020 Send PM Sun, 2025-Jun-15 02:03 (BST) Hi Marcelo, welcome to the site. I've sent you a request to read Dying Light of the Eternal City. it sounds like my cup of tea or Amaretto. Elizabeth Log in or register to post comments douglas esper Rockstar - Silver Joined: Dec 2024 Send PM Fri, 2025-Jun-27 15:22 (BST) Marcelo, Sounds cool. I'm sending a request now. doug Log in or register to post comments Elizabeth Blandford Rockstar - Gold Joined: Dec 2020 Send PM Thu, 2025-Jul-17 18:46 (BST) Hi Marcelo, thanks to your suggestions for Feuds and Neighbours I shortened the title and expanded the scene where Emma finds the document. Is that a new poster for Dying Light? I like it. Log in or register to post comments
Elizabeth Blandford Rockstar - Gold Joined: Dec 2020 Send PM Sun, 2025-Jun-15 02:03 (BST) Hi Marcelo, welcome to the site. I've sent you a request to read Dying Light of the Eternal City. it sounds like my cup of tea or Amaretto. Elizabeth Log in or register to post comments
douglas esper Rockstar - Silver Joined: Dec 2024 Send PM Fri, 2025-Jun-27 15:22 (BST) Marcelo, Sounds cool. I'm sending a request now. doug Log in or register to post comments
Elizabeth Blandford Rockstar - Gold Joined: Dec 2020 Send PM Thu, 2025-Jul-17 18:46 (BST) Hi Marcelo, thanks to your suggestions for Feuds and Neighbours I shortened the title and expanded the scene where Emma finds the document. Is that a new poster for Dying Light? I like it. Log in or register to post comments
Hi Marcelo, welcome to the site. I've sent you a request to read Dying Light of the Eternal City. it sounds like my cup of tea or Amaretto.
Elizabeth
Marcelo,
Sounds cool. I'm sending a request now.
doug
Hi Marcelo, thanks to your suggestions for Feuds and Neighbours I shortened the title and expanded the scene where Emma finds the document.
Is that a new poster for Dying Light? I like it.