For several years now, I've been screen-recording the first 10 pages of people's scripts while providing audio commentary as I go. So, unlike other people, I'm not reading a whole screenplay, or a chunk of it and then providing notes. My aim is to give you a blow-by-blow description of what's going through a reader's head when reading your screenplay.
Based on the feedback I've received on my method, I'm confident the vast majority of people find this approach very helpful. And I figured what better way to spend part of my Labor Day weekend than reading some scripts and seeing if my constructively critical feedback can help in any way?
Many ask about my credentials, so here they are: I've read and reviewed (in the traditional way) probably 250 screenplays over the past 20 years. I've done about 30 screen-recordings, give or take. I've written a ton of spec scripts, none of which have seen the light of day yet... but I've also written, produced and directed three micro-features, was hired to write a movie which unfortunately shut down 1/2 into production when the backer ran out of money; and have done some script-doctoring work along the way.
If you're interested, I'm just a message away.
Thanks for reading.
Jack