A young tutor takes a job on an isolated island and discovers the dark secrets behind the family that lives there.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
103pp
Genre:
Horror, Mystery, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
ALICE WILKINSON, 30, crosses choppy seas on her way to the island where she will work as a tutor for the children of the only family living on it. The boatman tells her about the island, a place with some peculiarities like its thick winter fog. When she arrives at the beach, she is greeted by two Dobermans, ready to attack. As she backs away, a man's yells out "freund"- German for friend - and the dogs become docile. He introduces himself as EDMUND WELCKER, 50, the man who hired her, and takes her on a tour of his odd home, with a beautiful garden consists of fake grass and plants. Alice is also introduced to the other inhabitants of the island: NICHOLAS, 8, his sister SARAH, 5, her governess FRAU SCHILLER, 55, and the two household servants. While taking a walk together, Edmund and Alice come across a pyramid near a tethered red boat. He explains that it is a monument to his teenage daughter, Anastasia, who drowned at sea several years earlier and asks her to not talk to anyone about the tragedy. Alice begins giving lessons to Nicholas, much more advanced than the typical boy, but oddly subdued. While celebrating Sarah's birthday, piano music begins to drift down from the attic. Alice is spooked, but she accepts Edmund's explanation that it is his wife who is suffering from an incurable bone disease. Her mental health is not good and she does not deal well with meeting new people. That very night, Alice sees a shadowy, tall figure outside her window. Then a heart-wrenching scream comes from the attic...
All Accolades & Coverage

"Anastasia's Pyramid" has received good coverage from The Writers Store Development Notes, World Series of Screenwriting ("Top notch thriller. The set up is familiar but it is very well executed, the atmosphere is creepy and the ending is very good), PAGE Awards ("With the right star attached and a suitably creepy location selected, Anastasia's Pyramid could be turned into a disturbing independent horror film"), Story Pros Proffesional Script Analisis ("This is a great script. The number one job of a thriller is to, obviously, thrill. And you succeed in that greatly. The writing here is top notch. Very strong suspense writing that you employ throughout the script") and 13horror.com ("It's a very impressive screenplay with a creepy idea underpinning it and a couple of very compelling characters in the form of Edmund and Alice.")

Awards: 2013 Beverly Hills Screenplay Contest (Bronze Prize Winner); 2013 World Series of Screenwriting (Finalist);
2013 Screenplay Festival (Finalist); 2014 New York Screenplay Contest (Finalist).

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The Writer: Carlos Burgaleta

Award winning Spanish screenwriter specialized in thriller/horror genre. I have written about ten horror screenplays, several of them awarded and finalist from prestigious screenwriting contests. I have had scripts read by some important production companies and my work has been optioned several times. In addition to my screenwriter career, I am the author of "Terror bajo las aguas", a published book about sea monsters movies, and several of my fantasy/horror short stories like "Prefacio a Poses" and "La historia de Fritz Maier" has been awarded and published too. I have worked as a journalist, transcriber and translator. Go to bio
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