They appear when you get married. If you kill one of them, they kill one of yours; if you don’t kill, they kill you. A bloodline curse that Marvin will have to learn to fight.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
87pp
Genre:
Horror, Mystery, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
Based On:
Based on the story "Children" by Kristine Kathryn Rusch
Synopsis/Details
MARVIN, 55, a rugged African-American man paddles his kayak across a lake while nervously glancing back as if aware of some menacing presence behind. A pair of deathly pale, claw-like hands burst from the water and grab him; after a struggle, Marvin kills the unseen swimmer by hitting his head with his wood paddle. Los Angeles. 1992. YOUNG MARVIN, 30, marries CORINNE, 25, an African-American woman with whom he is going to spend the wedding night in a cheap hotel. That very night, while the infamous L.A. riots break out, Corinne is violently murdered in a dark alley by someone unseen. Blaming the police for Corinne’s death, Marvin joins a small armed group formed some weeks after the riots. After a military training in the woods, he kills in self-defense a strange simian creature. The next morning he finds the corpse of MICHELLE, 25, one of his comrades, disemboweled. He takes refuge in his grandparents’ farmhouse in Wisconsin, where MARVIN’S GRANDFATHER, 80, tells him about some hideous creatures that have haunted the family for generations and he is later brutally decapitated by someone unseen. A bloody "eye-for-an-eye" game has started. As years go by, Marvin will have to learn to protect his friends and family while researching his ancestors’ history in order to know the enemy he is facing. A non-stop war which final battle will reveal that nothing is what it seems in this curse. --- "Moonchildren" is a free adaptation of Kristine Kathryn Rusch’s short horror story "Children". Structured in two interwoven time frames -the present day and a time period between 1992 and 2001-, this is an original concept for a horror script. The chronological jumps are very well negotiated during the story, the dialogue is strong and expressive of character, and its action sequences are very exhilarating. Suspense and eeriness are well built, as well as moments of visceral, bloody action. Overall, this is an original and intriguing work, with an interesting back story about racism and the circularity of violence.

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The Writer: Carlos Burgaleta

Award winning Spanish screenwriter specialized in thriller/horror genre. I have written about ten horror screenplays, several of them awarded and finalist from prestigious screenwriting contests. I have had scripts read by some important production companies and my work has been optioned several times. In addition to my screenwriter career, I am the author of "Terror bajo las aguas", a published book about sea monsters movies, and several of my fantasy/horror short stories like "Prefacio a Poses" and "La historia de Fritz Maier" has been awarded and published too. I have worked as a journalist, transcriber and translator. Go to bio
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