A drunk, elderly man approaches two young women drinking in a bar—and what he has to say to them isn’t quite what they expect.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
8pp
Genre:
Drama, Family, Mystery
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Based On:
“Daughter, Come Home” (2015), a posthumously published short story by Shirley Jackson.
Synopsis/Details
Summer, early 1940s. A slightly drunk old man enters a bar in a factory district. He gets a drink, strolls around, then asks two young women if he can sit down at their table. They agree, the old man sits, and he starts talking. He is particularly struck by one of the women, who, he says, looks like his estranged daughter. The old man then gives this woman—called Lois—advice on where she should work, how she should behave, and how she should treat him. Indeed, he starts to treat, and address, Lois as if she were his own daughter. After Lois and her friend have finally had enough, they threaten to have the old man thrown out. Rather than be removed from the premises, he leaves on his own—but not before telling his “daughter” to stay away from men and get along home to bed.

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The Writer: R. J. Cardullo

A former university film teacher, I turned to screenwriting several years ago. I have also written film criticism for many publications. A New Yorker by birth, I grew up in Miami and was educated at the University of Florida, Tulane, and Yale. My last U.S. address was in Milford, Connecticut; I am now an expatriate residing in Scandinavia. Many of my scripts (both long and short) are adaptations of lesser-known works by well-known authors. I am happy to re-write, collaborate, or write on demand. Thanks kindly for any attention you can give my work. Go to bio
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