An expert fireman runs into a burning factory. But where is his axe? Seems like politicians are making some "dangerous" things illegal and it complicates matters.
Type:
Short
Status:
Available for Free
Page Count:
17pp
Genre:
Action, Thriller
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
It's another short script I wrote fast and just for fun. They always tend to end up being a few pages longer than what is ideal but 17 pages is not bad at all. This is a great concept that I could write a feature about. I have read through it and corrected some errors and improved the plot but I still need to give it a few reads before it's spotless I think. I don't have much story to add though but I think the dialogue can be spiced up in places and made more interesting and unique. Edit: Second draft ready. The first draft was filled with so many spelling errors, damn. But this is getting somewhere.

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Submitted: 2018-Nov-05
Last Updated: 2018-Nov-20
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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my… Go to bio
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