The Disappearing Trick by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

The Disappearing Trick

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A student comes into conflict with her teacher. He seems to have something that can make him win the fight by weird means.
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I saw someone who had some actors and a few ideas for a movie. I just ran with it and wrote this. I still need to work on it as I have not looked over all the character storylines. I also would like to add 3 more pages to it to explain the background story. But I wanted to keep it short.

The characters are probably 14, but I made them 16 because there is a snuggling and kissing scene there too.

Draft 2: I have worked a bit on this very confusing screenplay to make it less confusing on the page. Just because it would make sense visually doesn't mean that it makes sense for readers who may not clearly follow all the visual elements. So now I made it much, much simpler. Then I got feedback on it and yet again made it more simple! It's kinda on the nose and silly in my opinion. But I will keep it online.

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so.

I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get.

 

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