In Praise Of Men by Peter Gartner | Script Revolution

In Praise Of Men



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Do men deserve praise, or should women just praise women ?

Lori, Lynne, Ellen, Ann and Kim, in their twenties, are in a bar, drinking and discussing life, in particular, men. Lori thinks men
are desperate for praise. Lynne counters that men are just desperate for sex. Lori determines to take more control over her sex life
with her partner, Lee.

Lee, in his late twenties, is having sex with Lori, but she tells him to stop, as she finds he is too rough, too fast and vigorous
for her to enjoy sex with him. He obeys and stops. She asks him if men really want praise. Lee says that men expect praise for what
they have achieved, but he would praise a woman for how she looks.

Lori wants more gentle sex and tells Lee that she only wants him to romance her from now on. She particularly likes him to kiss down
her neck, and he can do this in a gentle way.

Lori seeks an older man, Greg, in his early forties, to have sex with her. Greg is more gentle and the sex with him is more the way
Lori likes it.

Ellen tells Ann that she is fed up of sex with men, and is really a lesbian. Ellen successfully seduces Ann, and they have lesbian

Lori only allows Lee to romance her, but she encourages him to have sex with Lynne, who likes more vigorous and rougher sex. Lee
and Lynne have sex, with Lori's blessing.

One day, Lori is romanced by Lee, but immediately afterwards, she has sex with Greg in the bedroom of Lee's apartment, with Lee
watching, trying to learn how to have sex in a more gentle way.

Though this humiliates Lee, he gets his revenge by insisting that Lori watch him and Lynne having sex.

Lori, Lynne, Ellen, Ann and Kim meet up to discuss their sex lives, and they all agree they are satisfied. Kim is non-sexual and
says not having sex suits her.

Lori proposes a toast in praise of men. Ellen replaces this with a toast in praise of women.

Submitted: January 9, 2020
Last Updated: January 9, 2020

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The Writer: Peter Gartner

I wrote a few screenplays a while back, but now I have a place to submit them. At the moment I am painting in watermixable oils and have a gallery at FineArtAmerica. I am concentrating on art now, but if there is some interest in my screenplays, I could submit more. I start with "The Lightship". I have now posted some more. I want to create original scenarios with surprises for the audience. I do not want my scripts to be predictable. The unusual is always best. A script should be a journey. You don't know the destination, but you will enjoy the journey getting there. I like to explore the psychology of my characters, to give the story more depth. Also, there is now a link to my paintings... Go to bio

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