Unexpected and unannounced, a writer calls upon his ex-wife, only to summon her welled-up wrath.
Type:
Short
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
10pp
Genre:
Drama, Family, Romance
Budget:
Shoestring
Age Rating:
13+
Based On:
“Intimacy” (1986), a short story by Raymond Carver.
Synopsis/Details
Finally having attained some success later in his career as a short-story writer, a man decides to stop by his ex-wife’s house unannounced, though they have not seen each other for four years. Immediately upon seeing him, the ex-wife launches into a long, passionate monologue filled with bitterness and anger, all directed toward her ex-husband for his betrayal of her. Through the vitriol and pain, however, comes the clarity of genuine emotional connection—one that the woman cannot help but continue to feel toward this man. When at last the attack begins to fade and the ex-wife takes up a normal tone, the writer is on his knees holding fast to the hem of her dress. This moment of possibility is suddenly lost when she realizes the potential for trouble if her current husband were to show up on time for his daily lunch. Suggesting that her ex-husband is there only to use her as fodder for more fiction, the ex-wife then asks him to leave, and he obliges.

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The Writer: R. J. Cardullo

A former university film teacher, I turned to screenwriting several years ago. I have also written film criticism for many publications. A New Yorker by birth, I grew up in Miami and was educated at the University of Florida, Tulane, and Yale. My last U.S. address was in Milford, Connecticut; I am now an expatriate residing in Scandinavia. Many of my scripts (both long and short) are adaptations of lesser-known works by well-known authors. I am happy to re-write, collaborate, or write on demand. Thanks kindly for any attention you can give my work. Go to bio
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