Loula by Ellynn Mayo | Script Revolution


When Longview Mansion is turned into a home for troubled girls, the ghost of renowned horsewoman Loula Long Combs haunts Heather Lovelace, a schizophrenia patient. Loula convinces Heather to reject treatment for freedom.



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Heather Lovelace is a long-haired, melancholy schizophrenia patient in the 70s. She loves to read but hates the home. She sees Loula’s ghost as a chance to be free from her mental illness. Loula is the ghost of the woman who lived in the mansion before it was turned into a home for troubled teen girls, and she wants Heather to be free like she was in her life. Dr. Green is Heather’s therapist, who only wants Heather to have as normal a life as possible. Loula begins to poison Heather's mind as she makes her way through the hospital, fighting her illness. We aren't sure if Loula is a part of Heather, a ghost apparition, or both. Loula makes Heather do unspeakable things without recollection, and Heather has to choose to either go with Loula or return to the hospital. All the while, she's fighting the truth that's just underneath the surface of her mind.

Submitted: May 16, 2021
Last Updated: May 16, 2021

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The Writer: Ellynn Mayo

Ellynn Mayo's first memory of writing comes from sitting in their backyard at age seven and re-writing their version of Goldilocks and the Three Bears. From there, they went on to win an award in first grade for a poem about cardinals, start a student-led newspaper at their middle school as the head copy editor, start a personal blog, and place third in Mid-Continent Public Library's LitUp poetry competition. They also served as a copy editor and contributor to both their high school newspaper, the Titan Scroll, and creative writing club, which published an anthology entitled The Canary Sings. Ellynn has self-published three short works through Kindle Direct Publishing. They currently serve... Go to bio

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