Pigeon in the Shoot

A father and son take part in a pigeon-shoot, where the son is the better shooter—and flaunts it.

Type:

Short

Status:

For sale

Page Count:

4pp

Genre:

Drama, Family

Budget:

Shoestring

Age Rating:

Everyone

Based On:

“I Guess Everything Reminds You of Something” (1955), a short story by Ernest Hemingway.

Synopsis/Details

Cuba, 1945. An American father observes his young son’s superb performance in a pigeon-shooting competition. Speaking only a few, hoarse words during the contest, the boy has a sneaky way of identifying traps by the unique sound of their release. Yet he is egoistic enough to tell his father—a lesser participant in the same competition—that he doesn’t understand how any shooter can ever miss a pigeon. The father understands his son’s special ability, but urges modesty and warns him never to share such a sentiment with anyone else.

Story & Logistics

Story Type:

Rite of Passage

Story Situation:

Erroneous judgment

Story Conclusion:

Ambiguous

Linear Structure:

Linear

Moral Affections:

Disapprobation, Intemperance

Cast Size:

Few

Locations:

Single

Special Effects:

Minor cgi

Characters

Lead Role Ages:

Male Adult, Male under 13

Hero Type:

Gifted

Villian Type:

Anti-Villian, Authority Figure

Stock Character Types:

Boy next door, Everyman

Advanced

Adaption:

Based on Existing Fiction

Subgenre:

Action/Adventure, Animal, Childhood, Drama, Hybrid Sub-Genres, Literary Adaption

Action Elements:

Physical Stunts

Life Topics:

Childhood

Time Period:

Atomic Age (after 1945)

Country:

United States of America (USA)

Time of Year:

Autumn/Fall

Relationship Topics:

Family, Genetic

Writer Style:

Carl Foreman, William Faulkner

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Submitted: 2021-May-14

Last Updated: 2021-May-14

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The Writer: R. J. Cardullo

A former university film teacher, I turned to screenwriting several years ago. I have also written film criticism for many publications. A New Yorker by birth, I grew up in Miami and was educated at the University of Florida, Tulane, and Yale. My last U.S. address was in Milford, Connecticut; I am now an expatriate residing in Scandinavia. Many of my scripts (both long and short) are adaptations of lesser-known works by well-known authors. I am happy to re-write, collaborate, or write on demand. Thanks kindly for any attention you can give my work. Go to bio

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Pigeon in the Shoot

Synopsis/Details

The Writer: R. J. Cardullo

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