Retribution For A Mercenary by Jaye Blohm | Script Revolution

Retribution For A Mercenary

Set in a 16th-century fantasy world, a mercenary group, comprised of weapons masters and mages, seeks revenge on a Dark Bishop that took the life of their Commander. Can a newcomer be trusted?



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We see the struggle between Bern and Rayen, two mercenaries in the same troop, as Bern assumes his new role as Commander after his father is murdered by a Dark Bishop. The mercenaries must find the enchanted crystal to forge a weapon suitable of defeating the Bishop. Bern builds a new team, practically from scratch, while Rayen, his right-hand man, makes a deal with the devil.

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Quarterfinalist, Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards Summer 2020
Quarterfinalist, ScreenCraft Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition 2020

Submitted: April 29, 2021
Last Updated: November 9, 2021

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The Writer: Jaye Blohm

Los Angeles-based, award-winning, Red Listed screenwriter. Lover of imagination, creativity, the beach, and animals. My scripts include diversity: strong women, people of color, LGBTQ+ representation... and they all have fantastic and vivid stories to tell! Go to bio

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