Mining opals hoping for a better life hardens her, she must open again to find real love. He’s dodgy, needing change to be worthy of her, and beat the bad guys to fall in love.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
105pp
Genre:
Action, Comedy, Crime, Romance
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
17+
  • Stage 32 - Recommended
Synopsis/Details
Ruby won the lottery and then managed to lose everything to a scoundrel scammer who broke her heart and stole her money. Humiliated and broke, she heads to the outback opal fields of Australia to make her fortune again. But she has hardened up and is done with men. She is on a mission to find the rare pineapple opal and buy an Inn on the coast somewhere quiet. While opal mining, she becomes best friends with Stanley. He’s a well-meaning, dope-dealing chopper pilot who is cruising through life waiting for something to happen. And something does. He meets Ruby. Then the local crime boss runs him out of town for stealing his customers. Stanley must fly back to Sydney to escape. However, on arrival, his chopper gets repossessed, and Stanley ends up as a barman in a small bowling club. Back in the opal fields, Ruby upsets a couple of old-school opal miners. She has been digging into their claim. Maps are hard to read thirty meters underground. She has her rare pineapple opal, and they are very angry. She must take off in a hurry. She heads for Sydney and her best friend, Stanley. He’ll put her up for a little while. Stanley and Ruby become roommates, but Ruby has brought the crime boss and the two opal miners she ripped off with her. Now Ruby and Stanley need some fast cash to get the chopper back and somehow lose the bad guys who are chasing them. The pair duck and weave until they can set up a sting that gets the bad guys all arrested by the cops. Back at square one, despite all their resistance, the walls finally come down, and they hit the jackpot. They fall in love. Also, Ruby has been hiding the pineapple opal she dug up in the next-door mine for a rainy day. It’s a happily-ever-after story about two best friends, who overcome the odds, to make their dreams come true and fall in love. It is “Pineapple Express” meets “When Harry Met Sally” - A low-budget romantic comedy adventure.
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FINAL COMMENTS:
Ruby’s Opal is an enjoyable script that has clearly gotten stronger from draft to draft, and will likely get even better as the writer continues to work on it. Much has been done to flesh out the character’s backstories, and there’s much more emotional attachment and rooting interest for the characters on the part of the reader/audience. There are many commercial elements at play here, too – from the strong female co-protagonist to the low-budget to the mixed-genre aspects – it’s just a fun and enjoyable piece of screenwriting that feels doable. But as the writer continues to work on this project, one definitely gets the sense that the script will continue to grow in surprising ways. Right now, it all very much works in the same way that the first draft did, but it just “feels” a lot more smooth and more professional. Keep up the solid work, and keep moving in this direction on all fronts!

Nick Clement 
Variety Magazine

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The Writer: Darrell Giles

Me in a nutshell. During my first ten years of working life, I had 45 jobs. I wanted to save up enough cash to make a movie. I didn’t. I decided to focus. For the past 27 years, I’ve been a stand-up comedian and will keep doing this until I get it right. Recently, I completed courses at the Australian Film Television and Radio School in screenwriting and directing. I aim to start a streaming service or sell a screenplay, whichever comes first. And here is the list 1993 – Acting for screen – Gala Studios 1994 to 2002 – Wrote produced and directed short films – “I’m Laughing”, “Dean’s Pig Tale”, “Dark Mist of Death”, “Local Legends”, and “Man with Attitude”. 1996 - I started my Stand-up… Go to bio
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