Forced to stay with their ex-convict dad for a summer, two boys discover a dark family secret that lead them to runaway rather than return to their mom and abusive stepfather.
Type:
Feature
Status:
For sale
Page Count:
97pp
Genre:
Drama
Budget:
Independent
Age Rating:
13+
Synopsis/Details
MICHAEL (13) and DAVY (11) live in constant fear of their abusive stepfather FRANK, so when their mother MARY tells them they will be staying with their father ETHAN for a summer, they should be happy, but they don’t know Ethan; he’s been in prison for 9 years for killing a home intruder. Michael has flashbacks of a dead body with a knife in it. After an awkward start with Ethan, Michael and Davy discover he is kinder and gentler than Frank, so they beg their mother to stay through the school year, but she says no. When Ethan sees signs of Frank’s abuse on the boys’ bodies, he determines to go for custody, despite his prison record. At the custody hearing, the judge refuses to hear the boys’ testimony and orders them returned to Mary and Frank. Horrified and despairing, the boys concoct a hasty plan to run away and hide in the woods. Ethan helps by leaving the boys alone to give them time to make their escape. When Frank and Mary arrive to pick up the boys and find them gone, Frank beats Ethan into a coma, believing him to be hiding the boys himself. Hiding out in the forest with Davy, Michael remembers an additional detail about the night of the murder: someone else was in the house that night. He and Davy leave their hiding place to share the information with Ethan, but find him in the hospital. Outside the hospital, Frank catches them and forces them into his truck. As Frank drives them back toward their old life, Michael manages—with the help of a friend’s voicemail—to record Frank confessing to killing the intruder himself and framing Ethan—with the help of Mary. Not long after Frank returns home with the boys, the police show up to arrest both Frank and Mary. Ethan’s conviction gets set aside, and he’s awarded permanent custody of Michael and Davy.
All Accolades & Coverage

Quarterfinalist, The Finish Line Script Competition, 2021
Semifinalist, Atlanta Film Festival, 2022
Quarterfinalist, Emerging Screenwriters, 2022

Coverfly All-time Overall Top 35%
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The Writer: Joel McElvaney

Joel McElvaney is produced screenwriter specializing in taut thrillers and action comedies. Co-writer of Murder at the Writer’s Retreat (IMDB). Known for taking a workshop from William Goldman in college, then waiting 30 years to start his screenwriting career. A former high school English teacher and screenwriting instructor, McElvaney has garnered accolades for his fantasy/comedy Dragons of the Gloaming, a Top 5 Finalist in the Save the Cat! Screenplay Challenge; his dystopian thriller Twisted Justice, a Semi-Finalist in the Atlanta Film Festival Screenplay Competition; and his risqué TV pilot The Pineapple Chronicles, a 2nd-rounder at the Austin Film Festival. McElvaney is an active… Go to bio
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