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What do you like about this script?
What I enjoyed most about this script is how Scott's sense of greatness is rooted in his grandfather’s unwavering belief and support for his grandson as he explores his talents. The dynamic between the grandfather Harry and his grandson Scott feels genuine and heartfelt. The way the montages are described really helped me visualize these as animated sequences. I loved that you made this creative choice because it is detailed and imaginative, offering a fresh, creative approach to storytelling compared to traditional methods.

I also appreciated the use of powerful, thoughtfully chosen quotes sprinkled throughout the script. It’s refreshing to read a story about a child with talent that doesn’t fall into the typical “child prodigy” trope. Often, children in music or entertainment are pushed beyond reason, expected to be perfect. Here, however, Scott is portrayed as vulnerable, facing bullying and academic struggles, even being told he has a low IQ. Yet, despite this, he believes in himself and in the end comes to the knowledge of what makes him special. That contrast adds depth and realism. A standout moment for me was when Harry tells Scott he’s not a number and his IQ score shouldn’t define him. I was genuinely moved by the scene where Harry takes Scott under his wing, gives him a small cello, and lets him experiment with the strings. The advice that it’s better to be terrible at something now to become good later is a beautiful message that resonates beyond childhood. It’s a lesson many of us need to hear as adults too.

What do you think needs work?

Overall, the script is clear and well-paced, with no confusing moments. Though the ending could be strengthened with more development of Scott's adult life. The context around his dissertation feels a bit thin on dialogue. Adding meaningful conversations, maybe with the grandfather or someone else, would create symmetry and tie the story together full circle. It would reinforce how the wisdom passed down has shaped him. Regardless, this is a powerful first draft. You’ve done an amazing job telling this story.