Style Story by Carl W Lucisani | Script Revolution

Style Story

A woman helps her best friend escape a spiral of treacherous conduct and heartbreak.

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112pp

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Faye is a punkie, strong-willed woman struggling to move on from a former lover. Her best friend Elly stands loyally by her side in a platonic romance to try and free her from the treachery and heartache.

The author describes this content as raunchy, mysterious and heart-breaking. This story will make you cry more than once.

I would love to make this into a movie one day and touch the hearts of people. The script is still being improved so if you like it and have any questions please don't hesitate to ask.

About the characters:

FAYE: A punkie woman with a broken heart. She's a risk-taker, and often finds herself trapped in wrongful situations. She's hellbent on finding the right man for Elly.

ELLY: Faye's best friend and loyal companion. Generally shy, she is more worried about Faye than trying to find a boyfriend.

PETER: The perfect husband. Ladies man.

LINDA: Peter's precious and Elly's blacklisted sister. She has what Faye lost and is willing to play with fire.

KAYLA: Linda's best friend. She occasionally drives in from the country to visit Linda and catch up.

AMY: CEO. Often praised for being super generous and friendly, she unleashes hell upon those who dare cross her.

NIKKI: Playful and hard working. She looks up to Amy like she was her mother, but something's fishy.

CHANGELOG

0.9
- migrated story elements from the first Amy/Nikki scene into the second
- rewrote Faye's street scene
- removed Faye's first sex scene as it painted her in a bad light
- rewrote mall center scene to the liquor shop
- various fixes to dialogue throughout the script
- grammatical/punctuation fixes
- optimized overall script runtime
- fixed some logic errors in dialogue
- added Faye/Elly link to the ending to add meaning/purpose to the story
- removed montage as it didn't fit the story
- other fixes

0.8b
- changed dialogue to fit the story better
- added some actions
- simplified character descriptions
- removed shopping montage
- removed cuts as they seemed useless
- other fixes

0.8a
- fixed an incorrectly labeled scene header
- slight reduction of dialogue for Kayla's phone call

0.8
- re-worded and simplified all action lines
- simplified clothing descriptions
- fixed instance where Peter's bottle magically became a glass
- fixed instance where Amy sat down twice on the floor
- fixed instance where Linda placed her wine glass in the sink twice
- changed some shots
- removed pot plant from counter
- added more missing (CONT'S)
- added missing cuts
- fine-tuned some story elements
- fixed some incorrect speaker names
- grammatical/punctuation fixes

0.7
- improved overall dialogue and content in script
- fixed instances where CONT'D was missing
- improved scene flow
- improved dream sequence
- grammatical fixes

0.6d
- improved overall dialogue and content in script (70% complete)
- grammatical fixes

0.6c
- re-wrote dialogue for Faye/Elly mall scene
- improved overall dialogue and content in script (35% complete)
- other fixes

0.6b
- removed most character facial expressions
- other minor fixes

0.6a
- fixed ellipsis that seemed incorrect
- improvements to shots
- added focus on some action references
- other minor fixes

0.6
- simplifications to dialogue in Amy's first scene
- added restaurant scene to improve Linda's story flow
- added restaurant dream sequence
- improvements to Kayla's phone conversation
- fixed some incorrect O.C. labels

0.5c
- added dress attire to main character introductions
- made some improvements to scene introductions

0.5b
- improvements to character introductions
- added some sluglines for relevant scene headers
- added scene transitions
- other minor fixes

0.5a
- 300+ grammatical and punctuation fixes
- other minor adjustments

0.5
- major rewording of actions
- removed character thoughts
- made improvements to character dialogue
- fixed many spelling and grammatical errors
- attempted to make use of continuous scene headers
- attempted to improve scene flow
- removed some unrequired dialogue
- set italics for text messages
- removed duplicate character introductions
- improved various parens
- removed first kiss
- reduced script by 5 pages
- other minor adjustments

0.4b
- minor improvements to some dialogue
- fixed some incorrect alignments

0.4a
- minor adjustments to some dialogue
- improved font
- reduced page count

0.4
- fixed some typos
- added some actions
- added some parens
- shortened amy/nikki's first smoke break
- added Kayla's massage link to Linda's dining
- adjusted 2 hidden references
- fixed milkshake inconsistency
- necklace scene is now more sexy
- re-arranged and reworded some dialogue
- added nail/lip link for Kayla
- fixed inconsistency with Linda's wine glass in spare
- addressed an issue with Amy and Nikki's seated formation during board game
- Amy's vomit joke is now more funnier
- removed some unrequired pronouns that sounded too robotic
- improved Amy's advice
- rewrote some of Kayla's scene to be more intimate
- added additional twist to pre-ending
- added missing light to Elly's front porch
- removed plant references as they were obsolete
- minor change to some ending detail
- added ring detail
- other fixes

0.3
- fixed CONT. incorrectness and added many that were missing
- migrated text parens to speaker
- attempted to fix intercuts and continuous scenes
- tidied up some unrequired bits
- fixed some V.O. dialogue that was incorrectly labeled
- fixed some typos
- shortened Faye's fingernails so she can form a proper fist
- added O.C. and intercut for mower phone call
- fixed some conversation
- added rain to ending with umbrella link
- added rubik cube detail
- added additional parens for ending
- other minor adjustments

0.2
- fixed many formatting problems (still not perfect)
- added some camera actions
- added reference to Faye's doll
- added dress question for Kayla
- fixed a problem that caused Elly to suffer a headspin despite not lying down first
- added additional queues
- shortened board game
- minor story related changes
- added page numbers
- reworded some dialogue
- added concept video for Faye's dance

0.1
- First version

Video: 
Faye/Peter's Dance from Style Story (concept)
Submitted: October 18, 2020
Last Updated: November 18, 2020

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The Writer: Carl W Lucisani

I am the creator and writer of Style Story inspired by the STYLIT mobile game. I am passionate for role play and bringing fabricated characters to life. Be safe Go to bio