The Monster in the Room by Jurij Fedorov | Script Revolution

The Monster in the Room

2 young men plan a deal with a third man in a school bathroom. But there is something very weird in this bathroom.



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I wrote this script for a guy who wanted a simple script set in a school bathroom. I had a concept ready for an apartment so I just wrote the concept in a bathroom instead. The guy never responded when I sent him the script but the very next day another guy contacted me and asked for a 5 page script to film. Well, I had just written this script and felt it was good. He agreed but it was 9 pages long. I'm too used to directors not responding at some point if I don't send them something they love right away so I felt it was just better to work with this script than try to send him other stuff. I worked it down to 7 pages with great difficulty. But this was okay for him!

So, yeah. Let's hope everything goes well in the movie production but this is so easy to make that it shouldn't cause problems for a director. It's 1 room, 3 actors, 7 pages, no effects.

Submitted: December 6, 2018
Last Updated: December 6, 2018

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The Writer: Jurij Fedorov

Try to read the script descriptions to see if I think the script is great or could use more work. I will rewrite all my old stuff from time to time too. If you read something I wrote I would be very thankful if you could just give me an opinion or rating on the screenplay. I'm trying to remove all my unfinished scripts from this site and really need help doing so. I have a master's degree in psychology and love to add science to my scripts. I like to structure complicated plots that take 2 watches to fully get. Info to directors All my scripts are free. If you really are planing to make a short film and film it well without shaky-cam I'm more than willing to let you film any of my... Go to bio

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