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Seeing Things from a Producer's Eye

As some of you know, I’ve been writing now for about 10 years. I have discovered several key things in those years and something new I just learned recently.

As a writer, I have the ability to create my own world. I’ve done just that in several of my works. I’ve had interest in those works and I’ve even had some options executed. Also as a writer, I can determine at what level I want to run at. I can create the darkest scene imaginable with the deepest level of depravity and feel just peachy about how the scene turned out.

In my mind, I know the audience I am writing for is small. Lets face it, our friends aren’t lining up to read our 105 page script any time soon. If we are lucky (and I am lucky), we have a handful of friends who will take on our work and give us honest feedback.

But the world isn’t full of hungry script readers. Just the opposite. Most average people don’t even know how to read a script. That narrows the readership considerably. Then if we are really lucky (and I am, lucky), we may get a gatekeeper to pass on our work to someone with authority and they may actually read it. Slim chance but it happens.

So in short, perhaps we write knowing the audience is small. By doing that, we take bold chances in our stories, hoping it will be the very thing that gets our story noticed and produced.

Now take your writers glasses off for a minute.

I’ve have recently gotten into the production side of the business. I’ve been buying lighting equipment, green screen gear, production software and just a couple of weeks ago, a super nice camera.

All of the sudden, I started looking at my writing differently. I started looking at it as someone who will be filming it for potentially hundreds or even thousands of people to see.

People don’t necessarily like reading a 10-15 page script but they don’t mind hitting the play button to dedicate a few minutes of time to watch something.

I now see some of my work as un-filmable in the eyes of someone who would have to risk his neck to get it produced. And by “neck” I mean time, money, talent, and shear work it takes to put something on a screen.

I see the obstacles in my screenplays that a producer surely sees when reading my work. Super tough scenes to film, ultra-dark content, and expensive sets to produce.

As a consequence, the first film I’m shooting will not be anything I have already written but a new script entirely based on my needs as a director and producer. Deeper character, less expensive sets, scenes that are driven to entertain a broader array of viewers.

In short, a script that appeals hopefully to the majority of the viewers who take the time to watch it. Not just to the writer and the handful of readers who happen to crack open the script to read it.

As a screenplay writer, I hope you take away one small bit of advice. Write the world you want to create, but write it in a way that will make a real world producer want to film it.

About The Author

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Real name:
Shawn Davis

Shawn began writing in 2008 as a means to overcome a lifelong reading disorder. After several short scripts, he took on writing his first feature screenplay in 2009. Six years and several screenplays later, Shawn's highly acclaimed script Equal Retribution was reviewed and given one of the highest screenplay ratings ever handed out by Carson Reeves of Scriptshadow.com View full review here -…Read more

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John Hunter's picture
John Hunter Rockstar - Gold Joined: Oct 2016 Send PM
Thu, 2017-May-18 02:36 (BST)

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Wed, 2017-May-24 19:34 (BST)

I remember seeing a post here and I wanted to reply but now it's gone...

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Gabe Spangler Authenticated Joined: Feb 2017 Send PM
Wed, 2017-May-24 16:45 (BST)

Thanks, Shawn. As a filmmaker myself, I have done nothing BUT write for myself. Which is great for me, as it produces a script I know I can feasibly make. On the other hand, it doesn't have any big budget appeal. It often seems plain to the reader, because it doesn't have any big set pieces or action sequences that would cost a lot of money to do. You would think this would make it an easier sell to the indie market, which is clamoring for low-budget scripts with potential, but unfortunately, they often can't seem to see a script for it's shoot-ability like you suggest in your post, so they often revert to the lowest common denominator of scripts in order to play it safe. Catch-22. Shame.

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Wed, 2017-May-24 19:38 (BST)

Great point, Gabe.

It's funny, the script I just completed for my first short was the best time I've had in a long time writing.

For the first time, I wrote it how I wanted to, not how I hoped someone else would see it.

There was a freedom there I've never experienced before.

It was also a hoot putting all the stuff in there they say CAN NEVER be in a spec script. Angles, direction, music score.

It was a blast.

It's gonna be tough going back to spec writing again.

Shawn......><

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Gabe Spangler Authenticated Joined: Feb 2017 Send PM
Thu, 2017-May-25 14:36 (BST)

It is fun. The most success with any short I made was the one where I just wrote whatever the fuck I wanted, and wrote the action based on individual shots I knew I was going to film. You have to just go for it and forget all the rules.

If I lived anywhere near you, I would love to crew on your short, if you ever make it.

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Thu, 2017-May-25 16:37 (BST)

Hey Gabe,

Right on regarding the rules. I think that was what I enjoyed the most. Format and spelling nazis are nowhere to be found cause no one else is reading it but me and the actors I'm bringing on.

And yeah, it's getting made. I've got all the actors signed on, locations secure...even a drone pilot.

We start shooting June 3rd...

If you're in Texas, let me know.

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John Hunter Rockstar - Gold Joined: Oct 2016 Send PM
Thu, 2017-May-25 14:40 (BST)

Being the producer, filmmaker and writer streamlines the process.

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Thu, 2017-May-25 16:37 (BST)

Yep. Perfectly said for sure.

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John Hunter Rockstar - Gold Joined: Oct 2016 Send PM
Fri, 2017-May-26 12:10 (BST)

Please consider Guardians of the Galaxy vs The American Astronaut. One is all FX, the other not so much. One had a $170 million budget, the other "...under a million." One had a $333 million domestic box-office, the other earned carfare. Movie making is a business in which eye-popping, big budget FX is generally rewarded more than storytelling.

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Gabe Spangler Authenticated Joined: Feb 2017 Send PM
Fri, 2017-May-26 17:50 (BST)

Nowhere near Texas.
:(
Sorry, man.
Good luck!

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Tue, 2017-May-30 22:48 (BST)

it's all good bro. Gonna do my first official shoot this weekend.

Very amped!!!!

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P.H. Cook Rockstar - Gold Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Wed, 2017-May-31 14:22 (BST)

I'm really excited for you Shawn! I've said for years that writers should try to shoot one of their own scripts, even if just with a cell phone. It will open your eyes to what producers and directors look at when reading a script. It will become clear as day, which scripts are not really filmable unless they are a big studio.

Looking very much forward to seeing your first film!

PS: You know you can also send me any script for feedback.

Pia :)

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Shawn Davis Shootin' The Shorts Admin Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Thu, 2017-Jun-01 15:49 (BST)

Thanks, Pia. You've always been a strong support.

And you're right. It does change everything from the writing perspective.

I'll be hopefully running this in a couple of festivals so as soon as I'm done, I'll send you an invite to view.

As far as scripts go, I can send you over the short I'm about to shoot to see what you think.

It's a pretty big endeavor for a first shoot but I'm pretty confident I can get it done.

Take care,

Shawn......><

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P.H. Cook Rockstar - Gold Joined: Aug 2016 Send PM
Fri, 2017-Jun-02 15:17 (BST)

Send it over. You know my email. :)

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