Synopsis/Details
Alfie Zimmer, a traveling salesman, pulls into a motel in Nebraska for the night. He settles in and pulls out a revolver, ready to commit suicide because he can't "go on living the way he had been living." Alfie has a hobby of recording strange bathroom graffiti which he has discovered on his many long, lonely travels. He starts noting down scrawls on the walls that attracted his attention, gradually becoming fascinated with them.
My story pairs Alfie we another stranger in the next room. They bond over their delusions and serve as sounding boards for their lost years. Left alone with their respective pasts, only one shot is heard. The ending ambiguous.
Story & Logistics
Story Type:
Pursuit
Story Situation:
Ambition
Story Conclusion:
Ambiguous
Linear Structure:
Linear
Moral Affections:
Respect
Cast Size:
Couple
Locations:
Single
Characters
Lead Role Ages:
Male Middle Aged
Hero Type:
Ordinary
Villian Type:
Anti-Villian
Stock Character Types:
Tragic hero
Advanced
Adaption:
Based on Existing Fiction
Subgenre:
Black/Dark
Life Topics:
Mid-life Crisis/Middle Age
Time Period:
Contemporary times
Country:
United States of America (USA)
Time of Year:
Winter
Illness Topics:
Psychological
Sport Topics:
Basketball
Relationship Topics:
Family
Writer Style:
Stephen King