Synopsis/Details
It's a script I wrote for a German director. He wants to translate it to German which to me seems like a huge job! I don't envy him at all. Writing it was the easy part.
Anyhow, the first version had a really complicated story with a lot of small details in it that were really hard to understand for readers. I had to explain what the different things meant for them to make sense to readers. So now I rewrote it and made it super simple. I think it reads much better now.
Story & Logistics
Story Conclusion:
Surprise Twist
Linear Structure:
Linear