Time Travel Pirates

One thing I want to see is more older actors is interesting roles. I always write female leads unless the lead is a funny loser and unlucky. Then I really like to see some poor dude get the short end of the stick in a funny way. I like to beat up my male characters and still see them keep going. While if I do it with my female characters I kinda get a bit sad instead. I'm a huge fan of time travel stories and will write 100 more scripts about time travel for sure. One thing I noticed is that readers tend to focus on small plot details in my complicated scripts instead of the story just being interesting or not. So when they give me feedback they tend to point out plot points instead of telling me if the story was interesting or not overall. Because of that I wrote this script that is for sure not about any logical plot. Actors: Young guy, 2 middle-aged guys, old guy, 3 kids. Locations: Inside a garage, outside a house, in a park.